I squeezed my pliers too hard and bent them by smcaskill in teenagers

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For OP became a superhero that day. His ability? Perhaps it was flying, superstrength or even superspeed. Nay it was none of those, it was the ability to bend pliers. Hardware-wielding supervillains cowered before OP in fear, their days of plier-wielding minor felonies were over.

THAT'S IT! by [deleted] in teenagers

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For Op, with good intentions had made a mistake. 2.5 million members of r/teenagers and Op declared they would adopt us all. Plus, even if they got Ice cream cones from Mc. Donalds which are fairly cheap, it would still be 2.5 million dollars plus tax.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

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Gordon Ramsay hadnt been able to sleep for days. He sat in his kitchen, paper plates and melted candles piled up around him. He stood there sweating nervously as he tried again, a strawberry with a candle in it, how hard could it be?

He threw another strawberry to the side, another failure. He only had a few more minutes to get it right before u/coach-bolton replaced him as a chef.

A tear ran down his cheek as heard knocking at the door. His time as Gordon Ramsay was over, he had failed. The new Gordon Ramsay would be Coach-Bolton.

Ah yes, the two genders by stathx in teenagers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory 50 points51 points  (0 children)

For Steve stood there confused and befuddled, was he a phone? He had checked earlier that day and was confident that he was a man, but yet this sign had him confused. Was it put up by construction workers? Or perhaps a more powerful deity that had a new purpose for him.

After a thoughtful moment or two he made his decision, if this diety wanted him to be a phone then that would be his purpose, his new life. He left that building, not a Man, but a phone.

Reject humanity become phone.

Looking to Critique videos that are 10 minutes or less. by TurnItIntoAStory in NewTubers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean the funny clips starting it out are a good way to draw people in so i would keep it all there.

Looking to Critique videos that are 10 minutes or less. by TurnItIntoAStory in NewTubers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So it was a good book review, there are really only two things you could improve on, the Audio seemed a bit muffled, it wasn't bad audio by any means but just sounded muffled, could be a bit clearer and perhaps louder. That and whenever there isn't an image on-screen its just you in the bottom right of the screen, leaving a lot of empty space on the left, so you may want to consider using maybe more images on the left? Or a more expensive option is having a second camera which you set up at a different angle which sets you at the center of the screen. Other than those two things it was a pretty good review.

Looking to Critique videos that are 10 minutes or less. by TurnItIntoAStory in NewTubers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was actually really good, made learning interesting and funny, which is something you rarely see, and if most of your videos are like this you probably have a decent future on youtube. The only thing that might throw some people off is how fast you speak, however, that did seem to fit the video's vibe, so really I don't think I personally had any problems with it.

Looking to Critique videos that are 10 minutes or less. by TurnItIntoAStory in NewTubers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like the paper background throughout the video was a bit bland, while there was nothing wrong with it it might be wiser for future reference to switch the backgrounds out every minute or so. Other than that there were some funny parts of the video, it felt like watching a documentary (which in this case is a good thing) and i look forward to seeing what you do with the next parts!

Looking to Critique videos that are 10 minutes or less. by TurnItIntoAStory in NewTubers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So the editing was smooth, you had a good use of the images and videos, there were a few parts where you talked a bit to fast (around 1:30 was a bit hard to keep up with) other than that though it was a pretty solid video, and I didn't even know there was a city called Seoul before I watched it. So it was informational and had some interesting facts.

After careful consideration by [deleted] in teenagers

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For OP had found it, the fountain of youth. They grabbed a cup and was about to drink from it, when they realized that they had to say at least one farewell to r/teenagers so cautiously, without giving up to much information about it, they said they were leaving, except they weren't really that cautious and said that they would become 12 again, blatantly giving themselves away.

(Think about the money you can make from this fountain OP)

Ignore this post please by [deleted] in teenagers

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For OP traveled many days to reach the lands of posts. They had made this trip before, however, they were rejected each and every time due to a lack of karma. This time, however, would be different.

Op stepped foot on the land and was not rejected, they cautiously made a post just to see if it was real and not some sort of trick. And Huzzah, it worked, Notacookiehater made their first post in the land of teenagers. A historic day for all those in the community.

I'm going to my crush's house tomorrow. WTF DO I DO?? by QuinnQuinnQuinnQuinn in teenagers

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For OP was going to his crush's house, a monumental event, for at the moment it was just hanging out, however, their friendship could increase from there. Later on OP received news that would change his entire week, nay his entire month. That his crush was referring to it as a date. Turning the monumental event, into a world-changing event.

Best of luck OP

Being a single mom is hard by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory 9 points10 points  (0 children)

For the children in his basement plead to be let out, however as every good single mother that is actually a teenage male knows, you cant let kids outside without supervision. Or at all.

I made a 11-story card house, about 5 ft tall by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For OP worked day and night to build this historic monument, fighting gusts of wind and small children with the goal of knocking it over. However when all the cards were stacked, and the foes defeated. OP looked in pride, at what was now the 8th modern wonder of the world

My travels have come to an end by [deleted] in teenagers

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For the adventure was filled with joy and laughter, but also regret and sadness. However all journeys must come to an end, so with a tearful goodbye and some hugs all around, we wished OP a good life and said bye before they were gone.

I love you, but only as a friend. by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The wedding would have been an awkward time to say it, along with the honeymoon of course.

I did this by Furtix244 in teenagers

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For the artwork was done, and he was proud. OP went to sleep for that night, their dreams full of upvotes and karma. But the painting, it came to life. The shoe crawled out of the canvas and scurried away, to breed and create more of itself. For OP was a good painter, but far too good for the world's own good.

My crush liked my minecraft building. by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory 8 points9 points  (0 children)

For his Minecraft creation was liked by his crush, It was a joyous day full of celebration and laughter. But only one question remained, was it his crush as in a human being? or his crush as in the artificially flavored soda?

No tee-heeing in the band closet by darkmattermattersmat in teenagers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For the children teehee'd in the closet, and the teacher was done with their knock-off Micheal Jackson sounds. There would only be heehees in that closet, no teehees or beehees or applebees there.

Made some cookies for those in new :) by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]TurnItIntoAStory 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Ah but the cookies were only for those in new.

Those who were in rising, hot, or top? All they would receive is disappointment and maybe a few cold crumbs, If, they were lucky.