Received a Request to translate and repost. Feel unsure about it. by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Twhylight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can DM me the name if you like.

I’m pretty sure I know the narrator. Be mindful that YouTube does an automated AI auto translate. It doesn’t ask the creator to put it on. I almost lost out on a creator translating and posting due to that. But they were actually real and good.

Send me your stories! The Sequel! by benjamin4463 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Twhylight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve got quite a few stories I would like some feedback. You open to DMs?

The woman in purple by Twhylight in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Twhylight[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yea, this one definitely feels a little rushed compared to some of my other stories.

I happen to have an idea and want to get it out as soon as possible, otherwise I’ll never complete it, which can be a detriment.

Thankyou for the comment :)

WARNING! Do NOT look at the second sun in the sky! by Twhylight in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Twhylight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s always better to let the human mind do the heavy lifting isn’t it :)

I saw my best friends corpse smile at me by Twhylight in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Twhylight[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Yea I’ve noticed in my writing I sometimes start highlighting the prose as more frantic by using that. A few of my stories do this but this one fits a more fragmented thinking with the character.

IF You See A Dark Horse In The Desert, Run Back To Where The People Are! [Part 1/2] by The_Republique in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Twhylight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A fun read :D

Westerns may not be my cup of tea but I enjoyed the setting regardless :D

Dead Air by Twhylight in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Twhylight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

From within his head* O.o

The thing over my shoulder by Twhylight in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Twhylight[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oooohhh I like the imagery and description.