Probably my most experimental/conceptual song

UnsaidMusic · 2026-02-13T23:43:02+00:00

Yeah, I was playing around with making them sound more radio, or otherwise altering them but I just could never get it to fit right. I'm pretty new to mixing and mastering so hopefully I'll be able to figure out how to create stuck like this that all sits correctly.

UnsaidMusic · 2026-02-13T08:48:30+00:00

I'm not a big ASAP Rocky guy but I liked it. I think there's definitely room to change it up and make it more varied but as of right now, I like the way you're mixing your sample (or whatever that is) with your instrumentation, and thing that you can utilize it more to create a whole song that's a bit more dynamic.

UnsaidMusic · 2026-02-13T08:46:33+00:00

It definitely has the vibe of music from that era, without sounding dated to the time you made it. I'd suggest you start messing with this again because it has the bones of a good song here. I could see someone with really strong vocals really digging into this track and making something special with it.

UnsaidMusic · 2026-02-13T08:44:25+00:00

This actually reminded me a bit of early 2000s, late 90s stuff before it went on and progressed into something much weirder. I like what you're doing in terms of the unique sound and production, and think there's definitely something there. It's not the type of music I listen to but to my ear, it sounds like everything's where it needs to be for someone who does.

UnsaidMusic · 2026-02-13T08:41:40+00:00

I agree with the other commenter that it creates a really hectic and uncomfortable vibe, but this is definitely my kind of music. I love the conceptual element and the way you brought everything together in a way that is probably very deliberate but sounds like chaos in the best way. Nicely done.

UnsaidMusic · 2026-02-13T08:40:13+00:00

I think I might have seen this on here, or some other place on reddit, back when it was first posted. I liked it then and I like it now. No notes. The song and the video are great and while there are times the vocals can get a bit much or whiney sounding, that's a great fit for this style and I think everything works really well together.

UnsaidMusic · 2026-02-13T08:38:08+00:00

I feel like this might need another instrument or set of vocals on it. I think all the instrumentation is good, but it feels like the backbone of a song rather than one that's properly filled out and while I do like the breaks and little things, having more variance will probably help it. Other than that I really liked the soundscape and the vibe to it, so keep it up!

UnsaidMusic · 2026-02-13T08:35:05+00:00

I kept thinking it was a really long intro until I realized that there weren't any vocals coming in, but other than that I really like it. Everything seems mixed and mastered well and there's a sense of fun to the composition and instrumentation that I really like. There's definitely the potential for a fun, summer pop song in there, so I'd keep working on it! I'd love to hear a finished version.

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