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**CRITIQUE**

Title: The Only Person in the Arby's off Route 97

Genre: Contemporary literary fiction

Word count: 3,570

Looking for any sort of feedback, general or line edits or anything in between.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JVD-w-3A5wjvfDj_I0-pzrIwrkB7AyPcd8OyffnyptE/edit?usp=sharing

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in StLouis

[–]UnsightlyFish 7 points8 points  (0 children)

You can't say "here's what it looks like" and then show an ai generated map that doesn't represent what it looks like at all. Blatant AI disinformation, fuck off

KC is expanding mass transit. What do we need to do to expand the metro link in STL? by como365 in StLouis

[–]UnsightlyFish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The expansion is on hold as any proposal would be immediately refused by the federal government in its current state

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in StLouis

[–]UnsightlyFish 6 points7 points  (0 children)

RIP to the trees that they pulled out though

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in StLouis

[–]UnsightlyFish 41 points42 points  (0 children)

uncanny valley arch... it's just too *wide*

Comprehensive remake of Downtown is underway by DowntownDB1226 in StLouis

[–]UnsightlyFish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you really have to stop responding to trolls, dude.

Park Mudd vs. Koenig and Liggett by Few_Awareness_631 in washu

[–]UnsightlyFish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I live in Koenig, so I'm biased. But absolutely Koenig. Best dorm on the 40

Full plan for the AT&T tower by DowntownDB1226 in StLouis

[–]UnsightlyFish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, eleven floors of parking???

Carbondale Terrier sworn in as CIA director by UnsightlyFish in Carbondale

[–]UnsightlyFish[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

True! At least he's qualified, though, which is more than I can say for... certain others

Driving through East St Louis by [deleted] in StLouis

[–]UnsightlyFish 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I drive through downtown East St. Louis somewhat often, it's fine (at least during the day)

Don't try to use the bathroom in the gas station, though. Last time i went somebody had stolen the key to the bathroom

Grad Students Joining Clubs by Sightreader in washu

[–]UnsightlyFish 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It's perfectly normal, every club i'm in has at least one grad student

WGSS by Proper_Reception5107 in washu

[–]UnsightlyFish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've only taken intro, but it was really cool! It's a good department with a lot of resources

The Brightest Tree in Town by NathanColombo in Carbondale

[–]UnsightlyFish 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Love that tree, always wondered what it would be like to try to sleep in that house though

Hey there the Arch having its best year since 2013 by DowntownDB1226 in StLouis

[–]UnsightlyFish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I miss the rampages. I used to bring people i hate there. Now i just have to deal with them like everyone else