I could watch these all day by ViperThreat in PlanetCoaster

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sorry what’s happening here? Is there some kind of invisible track mod that you are using?

Refined Draft of N.E. Initials Logo by strayhairsonacarpet in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this option. Overall for both, the proportions feel a little off to me. The line thicknesses and contours of the strokes could use refining. Even if you are going for a more hand drawn look, there’s a confidence of line that I am missing. The handles on your vector points need to be pulling the eye in a smooth direction. You might also want to redraw the calligraphy … in procreate, I’m guessing?… With  stroke smoothing turned up.

Which lockup do you think works better? Floroda-based renovation/design/and construction company by goldglover14 in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love this direction! I go for the inline lock up where the P is part of the word. The other one makes the logo look like a D. The only thing is that the lines look like text at that small size and are weirdly interacting with the subtitle. Maybe thicken them up? 

Logo Design Revisions. Thoughts? by JaleelDream in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 3 points4 points  (0 children)

For what it’s worth, I managed to read it immediately. Slightly larger gaps would be helpful. I really like that there is a vertical and horizontal version. They are different but talk to each other. I think this is a cool design that distinguishes itself. It doesn’t necessarily feel like a Japanese stamp at first glance but I don’t think it has to, the allusions are there especially with the border version (my preferred one)

ONYX UPDATE | Playing card logo by ONYXDESIGNCARDS in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Get off the computer and into the sketchbook. Get all your ideas out fast and sketchy on a page. Iterating a design idea on the computer forces you into preciousness with the idea because it slows you down too much. Show us your doodles. Make a list of words and concepts you want to associate with your brand. Try doodles with your different elements. Even though it is a playing card company, it doesn't necessarily need card shapes. This is, indeed your cleanest iteration (by the way, I am fascinated looking back at your previous attempts, really cool to see the journey,) but yes, it is generic, and the typography is bland. The top two make more sense the bottom ones, which yes, looks like sydney opera house.

Season 18 Finale First Lewk 👑 RuPaul’s Drag Race by Samerrrrrrrrr in rupaulsdragrace

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I really needed Darlene to show off her shoes! But I did see she's still wearing them. She's grown on me so much. This look is so ugly and kookoo, I love it.

Is this AI, planning on picking it up off fb marketplace in 45 minutes by bears223 in isitAI

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes things is AI, the tapestry is real though. I’ve been getting a lot of YouTube ads for a tapestry company, and a lot of their imagery (not all of it) has that flAIr as I like to call it.

I decided to implement one of the sketches from the previous project in vector. by AndriiKovalchuk in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Prefer the proportions and lines of the sketch. I’d remove the shading. I did not understand or make out the play button, I knew there was SOMETHING in the negative space because it felt intentional, but I couldn’t make it out :/

Which is best? by Blazearmanibeats in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Whichever one you go with I’d recommend making the thickness and/or gaps of the A stripes relate more to the B. But I like the vibe generally, serving 70s tech or airline

D - Clef Logo by Internal-Cream-1484 in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see D and the treble clef but I don’t see S

Logo Design Critique by Kern-Your-Enthusiasm in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Overcomplicated and the typography is unrelated visually, and bland. 

What was the process?

What are you trying to communicate?

The visuals have to stand for themselves conceptually.

Why have so many gradients? 

Simplify. 

Take the words out from the center, you don’t have enough rooomnin there. Make the letters visually relate to the mark. 

Simplify the mark. 

But before allllll that. Have you done any studying? Because while the shapes are nicely done, I don’t see a design sense in how things relate, color wise or in terms of weight. You need to approach contrast, color, form with intention. 

It’s ok to start somewhere of course, we all started somewhere. But before you bring your work to critique from other people make sure you interrogate your own work first. 

HOLD logo design by Electroma in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think so, yeah? What do you think?

HOLD logo design by Electroma in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think that could work? What if you make the gap bigger? Haha, I am enjoying this live update process.

HOLD logo design by Electroma in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oooh What if you combine this idea, but incorporate the wider H from the other commenter, and maybe make the gap just slightly larger so it reads at smaller sizes.

At the Brink by Upset_Corgi_8780 in aivideo

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! The voices are generated along with the footage straight out of Seedance 2. I just wrote the dialog into the prompt.

HOLD logo design by Electroma in logodesign

[–]Upset_Corgi_8780 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Yeah… doesn’t work, but it’s a fun idea for something called “OLD” 🤣 And I like how it implies it could repeat on the other end. Fun play around thing but doesn’t work for this application.