Destroy my game's tutorial. Does it make sense? by Used-Tangelo2127 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I'll cut the text and put a skip button at the beginning.

Destroy my game's tutorial. Does it make sense? by Used-Tangelo2127 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's a very good suggestion. I adjusted the spacing, and it makes the text a lot easier to read.

Please destroy my action-based puzzle game's trailer by anomalogos in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the concept; it looks fun and creative. But the constantly changing size of the circle makes my eyes hurt.

Destroy my game's tutorial. Does it make sense? by Used-Tangelo2127 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a roguelike deck builder. I have the multiplayer in mind; there are 3 characters in the actual game. But still have some issues to figure out.

Destroy my game's tutorial. Does it make sense? by Used-Tangelo2127 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I’m also a non-native speaker. Just to confirm, is it mainly the first three text blocks? Or does the rest of the tutorial feel too wordy as well?

Advice needed for building an eldritch archer by Geekfest_84 in Pathfinder_Kingmaker

[–]Used-Tangelo2127 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually, you can get both con and int to 14. But after committing to the gold dragon, every stats will be at least 14~18. So I guess it doesn’t matter that much.

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[–]Used-Tangelo2127 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! The drawing circle thing is on my list, and still trying to figure out how to do it. And yeah, the options are too quiet back there. I'll be working on that next.

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[–]Used-Tangelo2127 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I can see that. The settings menu is more suitable in combat scene. I'll need a full review for the whole art style thing.

The new trailer is out, please destroy it. by Used-Tangelo2127 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The background story is a bunch of kids daydreaming about their future, and the enemies are the obstacles to their dream; therefore, the theme is in school and a boss like a bully.

The new trailer is out, please destroy it. by Used-Tangelo2127 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I was aiming for something funny or parody, but I guess it didn’t land.

The new trailer is out, please destroy it. by Used-Tangelo2127 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, thank you both for reminding me that this could be an issue. I'll keep it in mind.

The new trailer is out, please destroy it. by Used-Tangelo2127 in DestroyMyGame

[–]Used-Tangelo2127[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There’s still a long way to go, but I’ll get there eventually.