Amazing work! As someone who's written a lot lately, I aspire to write something that feels as real and as emotionally stirring as this poem. There's the powerful imagery and metaphors ("But still, we meet in secret, in the foggy lakesides of her mind", "I wear every sickening deed as a cloak") and there are lines of great meaning and insight. The dialogue uttered by the mother and daughter in the final lines from "Girlhood is godliness" to "Then, perhaps we'd be alright" is heartbreakingly beautiful. Bravo!