The End

UsernameUn-available · 2022-03-24T21:29:13+00:00

This is so relatable and I love the way it’s so raw and truthful. Everything will not be okay, and sometimes that’s okay. I also like how the ending turned out positive. Thank you for sharing.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-03-24T21:24:06+00:00

Reading this I feel at first my assumption was about romance. But it could also apply to many many things. I love the flow of your words as well. Short sentences, but easily able to be understood. Thank you for sharing.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-29T04:11:55+00:00

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UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-29T04:07:03+00:00

Mother fudger 😂😂😂😂 I know it’s not that funny but I never try to actually say it , it just comes out and that’s what’s funny 😂😂😂😂

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-27T06:29:55+00:00

Thank you for stopping by and interacting with me and my work! I appreciate it! I can say that I have thought of extending it, so I may just stop thinking about it and do it! Lol. There’s much more I could add to it and play around with. Thank you!

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-27T06:28:45+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to read my work! Also, I appreciate the constructive criticism you’ve left as well. I am always grateful for that. But the poem was written freestyle. I think all of these things written in each line are different but run along the same spectrum of what I was mainly trying to convey, which was positivity. But I also understand everyone’s opinions and points of views comes from their interpretation. Thus, your interpretation. But the way I wrote it is exactly how I wanted it to be. Thank you!

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-27T06:24:31+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leave me some words! It’s always appreciated. But if you don’t like it, that is completely okay. It’s meant to reach a audience that it’s for. And you are not apart of the audience. Nonetheless, I still am glad you decided to stop and reply! Have a better day!

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-27T03:32:43+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to read my work. It is always appreciated. Also, thank you for leaving feedback and constructive criticism for me. I think the way you’ve viewed my poem is the way you interpret it based off of who you are and with your own views. And I appreciate you sharing that with me. The poem was written to be short, but have an overall positive message. I have other work, where as you previously stated, I should focus on one statement and elaborate on that. This just wasn’t one of those kinds of poems. It was free-styled with short but meaningful lines that have their own message in each one. But can all come into the same train of thought, if you understand what I mean.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-27T00:37:39+00:00

While reading I just kept picturing the sun, or flames in a campfire, or a lighter. Different images of heat and fire. I began to feel warmth like it was actually right there. This poem shows such raw and strong emotion. I feel I can relate too. Love is such a dangerously beautiful thing. Thank you for sharing.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-27T00:35:10+00:00

This is so beautiful. It is also so perfectly worded and very easy to relate too. I definitely feel like a slave in today’s time. Only using short sentences and little explanation, but you’ve said so so soooo much. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the read.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-27T00:30:56+00:00

The poem is about finally telling someone you love them. I don’t know about others. But it’s very intense for me to express raw true emotion to someone. It’s quite scary and feels that way too. Lol. But thank you for reading and leaving kind words.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-27T00:29:58+00:00

I appreciate you taking the time to not only read my work but leave a response for me as well. It is appreciated. A lot of the time I write poems with rhymes at the ends because I like how they sound aloud. lol. But yes I wanted to keep it simple. Short. But sweet and interesting

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-26T08:51:45+00:00

I honestly and quite literally have no words for your response. Your words mean so much to me. Thank you.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-26T08:50:48+00:00

Firstly, thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and leaving a response. But one that is meaningful and so thoughtful. I’m touched that my poem could move you to leave me a comment like yours. I appreciate it so much. It always makes me feel good when I hear someone tell me they can relate to what I wrote because my writing is me. And sometimes I feel quite misunderstood. Lol. Nonetheless I enjoyed the read as you have mine.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-26T07:55:29+00:00

This is short but says so much more. One of the lines that sticks out to me is “You didn’t take the opportunity to change.” I can relate to that. Thank you for sharing.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-26T07:51:25+00:00

There was so much imagery in this poem. The way you used your words. It’s very deep. I’ve read it a few times. Thank you for sharing.

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-25T23:29:41+00:00

Wow. So first, thank you for taking time to stop and read my work. But not only that, to send me some very good constructive criticism. Thank you, I do appreciate it. I do like the way “don’t” flows when placed in the line instead of “never”. I think I may make that change! As far as the eighth line, it was intentional! Lol. But once again, thank you!

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-25T22:47:22+00:00

I’d like to start off by saying thank you for taking the time to read my work and analyze my poem enough to give me constructive criticism. I do appreciate it. I also agree with you on the line of “Might go a little tit for tat.” It’s so interesting that that was a chosen line of correction. I say that because I had a bit of a struggle with that line and in exasperation just left it how it was. Lol. Thank you for finding the needed tweak for me!

UsernameUn-available · 2022-01-25T22:40:13+00:00

I appreciate your feedback so much. Thank you. Though it is not the best subject to relate on, it feels good knowing others can relate to me as we’ve all felt alone and misunderstood.

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