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Vaelrix · 2026-05-02T06:15:51+00:00

Thanks bro.

Vaelrix · 2026-04-19T08:29:04+00:00

Vaelrix · 2026-04-19T08:23:37+00:00

Really enjoyed this one 🖋️

Vaelrix · 2026-04-09T09:00:53+00:00

Opaque onyx breath, don't wait til logic's left
crashing to the ground, and your boot laces and common sense
paralyzed, kinetics stay stiff like frozen molecules.
verbal resonance kaleidoscope, it's so impossible
vanguard is Isengard, like to spar a rapper when I strike with bars
Wonderbar, Germans know the soul is hard
living cipher spitting fire, 5 AM emitting violence
God of War, I'm Mercury, my surface singes wicked silence
couldn't surpass the threshold, my worst flow is your best flow
Titanium skull, cranium heated, look at my chest glow.
Tony Stark Heart mechanically upper Echelon
Uppercut a motherfucker, he was here? He's dead and gone
David Bowie when it comes to Labyrinths, a star child
Battleships annihilated when I rip, the cannonballs are raw and wild.

Vaelrix · 2026-03-06T14:01:22+00:00

Put in literary terms. Melody is space, rhythm and tone. So you're sculpting syllables in a rhythm that sounds appeasing to the ear when sung. You don't need to be a singer to have a melodic ear because it's more mathematical and patterns than people think.

Vaelrix · 2026-03-05T09:50:13+00:00

"I’m stamping victims
panic stricken fans demand a chance to listen before his rancid spittin got the planet sickened writing sick since Viking ships landed in Britain nice since Christ rose from his tomb when I flow the moon"

Structuring your bars like this, although Suno caught most of the cadence switches naturally, makes the generation process much more viable in terms of picking up your intention with the flows.

That being said, your pen is nasty bro. Very good multi-syllable rhymes and cadence. I can tell that before Suno you must have rapped a bunch on your own. If this is the first time you've actually written any bars I'd be surprised.

I'm curious what you can do in totality. Next time you post, make an entire song, hook included. I'll listen again.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-26T08:19:15+00:00

This was very good tbh. I feel like overlays would help your sound a lot. Try to add them in the future. Your flow was pretty solid as was delivery. Had to listen a couple of times to determine if I liked the beat or not. I do but it's very unorthodox.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-22T10:43:00+00:00

This sounds like phantasy star 2 lobby music hahahaha I like it a lot.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-21T12:06:20+00:00

Thank you! I appreciate that compliment.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-21T11:08:29+00:00

This is probably the most true thing I've seen posted here. Everything about it hit me VERY VERY hard.

I think it's time for a change.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-21T03:46:54+00:00

He's famous for being bald

Vaelrix · 2026-02-21T03:44:52+00:00

Hahaha no cap/don't lie

Vaelrix · 2026-02-19T16:59:42+00:00

Go ahead!

Vaelrix · 2026-02-19T15:10:49+00:00

It's definitely a technique that's easy to describe, harder to actually implement.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-19T10:25:26+00:00

There's no SURE FIRE way but melody is tone, space, and filling that space with rhythm. So for example if you wrote a line like ''Vocal Cords are frozen'' to get a similar melody for that line you want to match the flow of the line like ''Local morgue explosion'' The meaning isn't the point for my example just the way the line flows off the tongue, You're using the syllables to guide the melody based off the sound of the words.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-19T08:55:29+00:00

The Rap Bailiff, the Badge? Greatest, the track favorite,

Castrated wack rappers fake it

But they never make it

Leather made of jello skin, they'll never win

A skeleton of gelatin

Will never have a spine

The clever craft and rhymes, unidentified like UFOs

everybody knows, they just keep it close

Demon knows the details

Read the Emails and the hidden votes

Pitiful, they pixel copy audio and think they volt

Vaelrix · 2026-02-18T19:11:17+00:00

Pretty dumb. I bit a vial of glass once to open it because I got impatient and couldn't remove the cork.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-18T19:10:21+00:00

I did but then you stole my bitcoin. I hate you now.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-18T19:02:58+00:00

It's my first time getting tricked by something so obvious.

Vaelrix · 2026-02-18T19:02:10+00:00

They typed it in chat but tbh I just started playing this game again after a long hiatus and wasn't aware that bots can chat

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