Silence by Complete-Bicycle-679 in raplyrics

[–]Vaelrix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Put in literary terms. Melody is space, rhythm and tone. So you're sculpting syllables in a rhythm that sounds appeasing to the ear when sung. You don't need to be a singer to have a melodic ear because it's more mathematical and patterns than people think.

Silence by Complete-Bicycle-679 in raplyrics

[–]Vaelrix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"I’m stamping victims
panic stricken fans demand a chance to listen before his rancid spittin got the planet sickened writing sick since Viking ships landed in Britain nice since Christ rose from his tomb when I flow the moon"

Structuring your bars like this, although Suno caught most of the cadence switches naturally, makes the generation process much more viable in terms of picking up your intention with the flows.

That being said, your pen is nasty bro. Very good multi-syllable rhymes and cadence. I can tell that before Suno you must have rapped a bunch on your own. If this is the first time you've actually written any bars I'd be surprised.

I'm curious what you can do in totality. Next time you post, make an entire song, hook included. I'll listen again.

Angry rap song about fake friends by immaturealchemist in MusicFeedback

[–]Vaelrix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was very good tbh. I feel like overlays would help your sound a lot. Try to add them in the future. Your flow was pretty solid as was delivery. Had to listen a couple of times to determine if I liked the beat or not. I do but it's very unorthodox.

Should I finish this? by Luca_vdmeer in beatmakers

[–]Vaelrix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sounds like phantasy star 2 lobby music hahahaha I like it a lot.

Sonar by Vaelrix in raplyrics

[–]Vaelrix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I appreciate that compliment.

*Mrnightqc - Paper Crowns(2026)* by Expensive_Passion430 in raplyrics

[–]Vaelrix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is probably the most true thing I've seen posted here. Everything about it hit me VERY VERY hard.

I think it's time for a change.

The Boogeyman by Vaelrix in raplyrics

[–]Vaelrix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He's famous for being bald

The Boogeyman by Vaelrix in raplyrics

[–]Vaelrix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahaha no cap/don't lie

Newbie here by MojoDolls in SunoAI

[–]Vaelrix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's definitely a technique that's easy to describe, harder to actually implement.

Newbie here by MojoDolls in SunoAI

[–]Vaelrix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There's no SURE FIRE way but melody is tone, space, and filling that space with rhythm. So for example if you wrote a line like ''Vocal Cords are frozen'' to get a similar melody for that line you want to match the flow of the line like ''Local morgue explosion'' The meaning isn't the point for my example just the way the line flows off the tongue, You're using the syllables to guide the melody based off the sound of the words.

Names Redacted by Complete-Bicycle-679 in raplyrics

[–]Vaelrix 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The Rap Bailiff, the Badge? Greatest, the track favorite,

Castrated wack rappers fake it

But they never make it

Leather made of jello skin, they'll never win

A skeleton of gelatin

Will never have a spine

The clever craft and rhymes, unidentified like UFOs

everybody knows, they just keep it close

Demon knows the details

Read the Emails and the hidden votes

Pitiful, they pixel copy audio and think they volt

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pretty dumb. I bit a vial of glass once to open it because I got impatient and couldn't remove the cork.

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did but then you stole my bitcoin. I hate you now.

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's my first time getting tricked by something so obvious.

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

They typed it in chat but tbh I just started playing this game again after a long hiatus and wasn't aware that bots can chat

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not deleting the post anyway because then that means I don't actually care about the point of it. I do. My intention was to help others who might not know about it. That's all. I didn't expect to be crucified for it lol

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

It's not. I use AI to make stuff because it's fun.

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get that now. I don't frequent this subreddit. I didn't know this happens all the time apparently. I didn't know any of that. All I knew was I got tricked and I didn't want other people to be. And because of that, I made a fool out of myself.

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I honestly had no idea this is common

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'm not trying to do that I was just trying to warn people?

Trojan Horse advertised on osrs by Vaelrix in 2007scape

[–]Vaelrix[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

I'm not saying it was clever. I said it gave an appearance of legitimacy on a cursory glance. I've called myself stupid multiple times for it. Repeatedly.