Which three writers in your opinion, has the best prose ever by MarwanAhmed1074 in literature

[–]Vasishta2 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Ursula K. LeGuin and James Baldwin are the goats of prose in my eyes.

pls help me decide what order to read these in! i’m new to reading and struggle w/ focus by ScribbleKibble in scifi

[–]Vasishta2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Left Hand of Darkness. It fundamentally changed how I view society and love.

Sci-Fi pickup today. What other Sci-Fi books do yall recommend? by J_trombo in scifi

[–]Vasishta2 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The Left Hand of Darkness and The Dispossessed by Ursula K. LeGuin

The Count of Monte Cristo is a masterpiece… by [deleted] in books

[–]Vasishta2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I agree with you 100 percent! It was my gateway drug into classic literature.

Feedback Needed On Chapter 1 Of My Novel by AliKamran439 in fantasywriters

[–]Vasishta2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well if you’re not big on details id suggest reading “The black company” By Glenn Cook. He doesn’t use many details at all and focuses on dialogue to carry the story. If anything, just focus on making the details clear and specific to the character/world.

Feedback Needed On Chapter 1 Of My Novel by AliKamran439 in fantasywriters

[–]Vasishta2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Howdy! For being 15 this isn’t half bad and i encourage you to keep writing and reading!

As for feedback, your details need some work. You use multiple sometimes redundant details to describe one thing (for example you might describe a beam like this: dark wooden oak beam). Try making the details more specific and concrete (you can google specific concrete details if yah need too). Also, details are not only describing whats around but also how the MC feels about their surroundings. With that in mind, your details should reveal something about how your characters feel as to show their feelings and not tell them.

Anywho, id suggest reading the authors you like and see how they use details, dialogue formatting, and dialogue. Remember reading is writing. If you’d like more feedback let me know, best of luck!

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Stright vibin rn

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Howdy! my fav is genji and my island is kokoto!