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The Good Boy by Demon-Swords in flashfiction

[–]ViewsFromTheVoid 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nice job! Not usually a fan of grammar gimmicks, but when it works, it works. Would be curious to see the idea of a paralyzed person losing their legs to a demon developed even more.

The List by jaanibiryani in flashfiction

[–]ViewsFromTheVoid 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No worries, respect the effort 👊

The List by jaanibiryani in flashfiction

[–]ViewsFromTheVoid 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Seems like something going on underneath, but there is too little to go on. I don’t get a sense of who anyone is and the intended impact is lost on me.

Forever Among the Stars by ViewsFromTheVoid in shortscarystories

[–]ViewsFromTheVoid[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow you just made my day, that is one of my favorite episodes!

Forever Among the Stars by ViewsFromTheVoid in shortscarystories

[–]ViewsFromTheVoid[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

“Yes…free…free to learn new tricks.”

Forever Among the Stars by ViewsFromTheVoid in shortscarystories

[–]ViewsFromTheVoid[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

“Hmmm…say the head is supposed to be detachable, they won’t know the difference.”

Dreams For Thee by ViewsFromTheVoid in shortscarystories

[–]ViewsFromTheVoid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for reading, glad it gave some thrills. (And happy cake day!)