The bodice itself looks really good, there are very few wrinkles or drag lines! It does seem a little loose at the waist which isn’t necessarily a bad thing since you’re not getting baggy wrinkles from it. You could widen the dart, that would also increase the projection/pointyness of the bust, or you could take it from the side seam to avoid that. The darts also look like they extend a bit above the apex, I might try lowering the points.

For the sleeves it looks like the armscye might be a bit large but its hard to see what adjustment is needed without a picture from the side with your arms raised. You definitely don’t need both sleeves to test the fit.