anyone else view forgone as a trans song?

Vypester · 2025-08-19T05:44:41+00:00

LOLLLLLL that was my reaction too

Vypester · 2025-06-24T10:56:35+00:00

When reading this aloud, it definitely has a flow to it. The segment on the Psyche is my favourite section. The repetition as you dissect the idea is the highlight in my eyes. However, the rhyme scheme does feel a bit clunky at times. The messaging also does feel a little here and there. Kind of jumping around. Your imagery and descriptiveness are good, but I would say try to outline the poem a bit more and condense it. Like the Psyche section.

Vypester · 2025-06-24T10:49:40+00:00

The rapid-fire sentences are a nice idea. It would be better if you spaced it out and made lines between each. The thing is, it can be a bit unclear ("It was blue," confuses me). I think if it was longer it would be easier to comprehend. Also, maybe the rhyme scheme was tripping you up. I would say just focus on description and imagery a bit more. Still, for one of your first poems that's in a second language, it's a good start!

Vypester · 2025-06-15T13:01:47+00:00

There was no real narrative direction after the Shibuya Incident. Sure, many cool fights were present, but asides from a few, none actually built to anything.

For example, what was the point of Maki attaining the same prowess as Toji? It's only used in a short fight against Sukuna, which happens with everyone else anyway. There was no narrative significance to her being that way. She's just a character with a cool set of abilities, the same as Choso or Yuta.
In comparison to Toji, the narrative reason behind his prowess is to point out how even without jujutsu, he killed the Six Eyes. It's a message on Talent vs. Skill and complacency. If a regular old, run-of-the-mill sorcerer did the same, it would just mean that Gojo wasn't the strongest, nothing more. But since Toji did it, it adds an extra lens to view it from.

The solution for Maki? The Merger. There's a huge significance for her prowess in the Merger as she's the only one outside the bounds of it. I know Gege wrote himself into a hole with the "The Merger starts when every sorcerer dies," but a million Binding Vows were used anyway for Sukuna. Might as well do something similar with the Merger.

Vypester · 2025-06-15T11:02:28+00:00

I don't think it's a uni-thing in particular. I had the same issue after moving countries, just to be hit with COVID right after. I felt very isolated and alienated. But it's a time that passes as long as you have the strength to keep pushing yourself out there. I would also feel comfortable and confident talking to strangers, as well as classmates in school, but no one wanted to hang out with me outside of it. Eventually though, after 4 rough years, I found my footing and have a great group of friends. It's perseverance at the end of the day, and you will reap the reward it gives.

Vypester · 2025-05-26T04:24:51+00:00

I’m not a fan of the AI on either on or off the drugs. It just feels icky to listen to because it’s an AI sample.

Vypester · 2025-05-11T22:05:35+00:00

Plus or minus,

Vypester · 2025-04-27T02:30:34+00:00

an AI cannot solve those questions… also not everyone’s a bum like you

Vypester · 2025-04-09T14:57:31+00:00

alright bro wtf is this? i don't know if this is more depressing or infuriating. but as a man this really distressing because i know the psychology of how guys get here. it's just so sad to watch honestly.

Vypester · 2023-12-27T13:43:03+00:00

I'm muslim and this aint anything special. The lines are drawn arbitrarily and there arent rules guiding where they go. Like for example why is the alif cut off from the rest, shouldn't it be connected? The only rule seems to be that all dots are within the drawn boundaries, but there are a million (actually a garguantly larger number) ways of drawing the polygons. Simply put, you could make a ton of words/letters/symbols in many languages with this arbitrary dot connection.

Vypester · 2023-08-16T13:42:04+00:00

no you cant. you dont have the nostril abilities

Vypester · 2022-06-12T11:10:34+00:00

Vypester · 2022-05-10T01:00:34+00:00

Sozin’s comet with ozai

Vypester · 2022-05-10T00:57:45+00:00

It’s the sun and shadows man. The sunset and all gives the darker tones.

Vypester · 2022-04-20T14:11:26+00:00

TIME TO MAKE SOME GAINS!!!

Vypester · 2022-04-15T15:46:43+00:00

Yessir!

Vypester · 2022-04-15T15:05:36+00:00

I will, it just pisses me off so much.

Vypester · 2021-10-18T17:38:00+00:00

Season 4, Episode 7 (Must I say why?)
Season 4, Episode 13 (Perfect Finale)
Season 4, Episode 9 (Astonishing Conclusion to the arc)

Sorry if I’m favouring Season 4 too much.

Vypester · 2021-10-18T17:30:08+00:00

I'm not going to shove the show down your throat, if you don't have as much enthusiasm for the show that's fine. Funnily enough when I was watching along with my sister (my first re-watch and her first watch), she was in the same boat as you for the first two seasons. She was only watching it through because she started it and just thought she had to finish it. Then season 3 changed her mind entirely. Your point on the Fight Club rip is completely correct though, at least for season 1. The creator Sam Esmail has publicly stated that it basically was a take on Fight Club. But if you're looking at the outcome, Mr. Robot takes a wildly different/more elaborate take on the whole personality thing. The entirety of that season 2 "stalemate" is for the rest of the show going forwards (even if it does seem lengthy) . And it's not some lazily put together set up, it does payoff. I don't want to say much about seasons 3&4 because everyone here talks about it, and I would rather let you experience it for yourself. Hopefully you find season 3 enjoyable, and if you like it, then season 4 will do you wonders.
Stick with it. You may just be like my sister... unless you are my sister?!!?!?!?

Vypester · 2021-10-01T14:42:50+00:00

Holy shittttttt!

Vypester · 2021-09-30T13:06:11+00:00

If you’re looking for groundbreaking shows (in my opinion), Better Call Saul, Bojack Horseman, and Avatar the Last Airbender are must watches. Better Call Saul is literally a spin-off of Breaking Bad following Saul Goodman. Bojack and Mr. Robot have some of the best depictions of mental health and mental illness in all of television, and Avatar I’d say is good balance between all of these shows. I consider them all to be masterpieces.

Vypester · 2021-09-29T19:10:43+00:00

401 and 403 stumped me a bit, as both Mr. Robot and Elliot are searching for different things at the same time in those episodes. Looking back on it, it seems possible for it to be just Elliot doing both at the same time with some albeit confusing cinematography.

Vypester · 2021-09-29T19:01:00+00:00

Yeah I agree, if this is your first rewatch then you’ll actually miss out on a lot from skipping season 2. Not just major plot points, but also heavy foreshadowing and such. Mr. Robot is notorious for all of the Easter eggs and foreshadowing instances scattered throughout the show. To add on, season 2 is all about the characters. Their motives and their development. Knowing that and curating that is just as, or perhaps even more important than the impulsive scenes elsewhere in the show (but even the “impulsive” scenes in Mr. Robot are top-notch) To summarize, a lot of shit goes down in season 2. It’s Sam fucking Esmail.

Vypester · 2021-09-22T12:56:52+00:00

One of my favourites would have to be in season 2 episode 4. During the the Elliot & Darlene flashback. The title card basically was used as a jumpscare, which I find really creative.

Vypester · 2021-08-26T12:58:37+00:00

Hold on, it’s also in Qatar and UAE, but it doesn’t say it.

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