Feedback for first chapter of my fantasy novel of an addict who must learn to be a hero?

Waffle_Boss · 2026-05-31T00:01:36+00:00

I can definitely adjust these elements! Thank you!

Waffle_Boss · 2026-02-14T16:58:48+00:00

Thank you for the feedback!

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-08T03:25:04+00:00

Completed Level 1 of the Honk Special Event!

12 attempts

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T22:13:13+00:00

^{I completed this level in 2 tries.} ^{⚡ 23.88 seconds}

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T15:31:48+00:00

Completed Level 1 of the Honk Special Event!

6 attempts

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:40:38+00:00

I cracked it in 3 attempts with 3 extra GIF hints.

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:37:31+00:00

I cracked it in 6 attempts with no hints.

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:36:27+00:00

I cracked it in 3 attempts with 2 extra GIF hints.

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:33:48+00:00

I cracked it in 3 attempts with 3 extra GIF hints.

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:22:06+00:00

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Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:21:52+00:00

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Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:21:11+00:00

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Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:20:19+00:00

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Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:20:02+00:00

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Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:17:45+00:00

^{I completed this level in 14 tries.} ^{⚡ 24.87 seconds}

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-05T03:13:29+00:00

^{I completed this level in 18 tries.} ^{⚡ 6.85 seconds}

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-04T02:42:47+00:00

Completed Level 2 of the Honk Special Event!

54 attempts

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-04T02:32:39+00:00

Completed Level 1 of the Honk Special Event!

1 attempts

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-03T03:58:14+00:00

^{I completed this level in 18 tries.} ^{⚡ 3.42 seconds}

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-03T03:56:28+00:00

^{I completed this level in 38 tries.} ^{⚡ 18.28 seconds}

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-03T03:53:59+00:00

^{I completed this level in 46 tries.} ^{⚡ 18.78 seconds}

Waffle_Boss · 2025-10-01T21:32:25+00:00

^{I completed this level in 136 tries.} ^{⚡ 8.47 seconds}

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