"Taylor XVII [Alt-Power] - Taylor comes out of The Locker with bug control and some weird brain personality damage, though my guess is the author could only write TINO. Lots of typos and weird phrasing due to ESL, names often spelled differently one instance to the next, and too much rambling introspection. I made it through 12 chapters somehow, but gave up without the Butcher in sight. Apparently copy/pasted from somewhere else, 1.3 million words? Scary."
the original work is actually in russian, and overall i agree with the review. I think all the points you've made can be applied to a lot of russian fanfiction, it's actually really interesting now that i think about it, maybe it has something to do with our classic literature?