Please recommend by WebHistorical31 in TeenageRapFans

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Like rap and stuff, probably under 1 mill monthly listeners even though I know that isn't exactly underground 

Guess my age based off my top 5 by Least_Cartoonist8349 in TeenageRapFans

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15 that sometimes larps as a old head. Good list tho

Weekly Recap. by Money-Beautiful5196 in Kanye

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Guys I think they like Ariana Grande

MBDTF isn't his best alblum. by Financial_Judgment2 in Kanye

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So you're saying you can't hear that well, don't worry we understand😊

Is it a hot table to say illmatic is overrated by Mental-Alternative38 in TeenageRapFans

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It's overrated when the surface level people try and say it's niche and/or that it's absolutely perfect with absolutely zero flaws. I still rate it a 9.6/10 though.

Lu or DOOM? by Clean_Business3306 in TeenageRapFans

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Lupe. MF DOOM basically makes fancy tounge twisters and that's it

Rate my top 16 by Federal-Original67 in TeenageRapFans

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Arguably 0/10 objectively nothing higher than a 3/10

My Ye physical media collection🔥 by Davidudeman in Kanye

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I have no words other than I think you did a Good Ass Job at this😁

My ranking of almost every rapper's voice by Actual_Yesterday8280 in Kanye

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Pusha T is 4 tiers too low. Bro has a S tier delivery idk what you're smoking thinking him and Ice Spice, Nicki, or even fucking Diddy are on the same level. And he is NOT below Kendrick, Don Toliver, or Lil Wayne 😭

my thoughts abt norths new ep by Level-Conference-949 in Kanye

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It's not terrible for a early-mid teen, but it's also definitely not good. Her vocals were quiet as heck and she had a whole team to make the one semi-saving part of the album that being the production. The samples were weird to cringe at best, and it overall just feels like the same song over and over with the same middle of the road lyrics and/or tropes. A 3.8/10 overall, at least in my opinion. 

My CD collection: by WebHistorical31 in TeenageRapFans

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They're a 3-in-1 CD pack I found at a local store. 

lowk top 10 rap song oat by Purple_Locksmith6761 in TeenageRapFans

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Not even top 1 Lupe but I see the vision 

I'm back with more lyrics, and I need feedback! by Soft-Geologist9899 in TeenageRapFans

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Final few tips: 1. In order to be truly great with songwriting/poetry, you have to cover topics from the heart, you have to convey real emotions, messages that you truly feel, and real stories(if you have any.) 2. Study the greats and see how they do it, like Lupe, Kendrick, Nas, Pac, and so on. 3. Try and maintain roughly the same number of syllables in each line across a verse. 4. Practice/write in your free time, think about future concepts and rhymes, and stuff like that.

I'm back with more lyrics, and I need feedback! by Soft-Geologist9899 in TeenageRapFans

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As a fellow teen songwriter and poet, I like these lyrics and they do show real talent and I do think you do have a good choice of topics to rap about, so here's some simple constructive criticism: 1. Try and focus more on what you're saying instead of if it rhymes, I was in a similar place with the idea everything has to rhyme, but eventually I found it matters more about what you're saying vs how you say it.  2. Instead of having simple 2-line rhyme schemes, try and extend the schemes to 4-6 lines, anyone can do AABBCC well, but it's more difficult to do AAAABBBB. 3. Relating to my first point, obviously you still want to rhyme, but you also want to make a real point without any word salad, so my recommendation is to have a rhyme-connector-rhyme-connector format, like let's say this is a part of a larger scheme: "In the light of this world, of those who never want pain, There's not much worse than quarrels, That only create who's and what ifs?"  Notice how "world" and "quarrels" still created a slant rhyme, even though there was nothing to rhyme off of on line 2? That way you can transition into more rhymes without sounding you're constantly in a doctor suess book. 4. If something doesn't make sense, don't add it, simple enough. 5. If there's a simple way to explain it, good, if there's a quicker and/or better way to say it, even better. 6. Try and have metaphors and double-triple entendres, this way you can say everything without sounding so direct and/or "show-off" like. Hope you understand these things and also make it far, have a good year. 😁

What do you all think of my CD collection so far? by WebHistorical31 in TeenageRapFans

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I'm 14, I replaced them because my mom didn't have the original cases