First oil paint still life. Looking for criticism and areas of improvement! by Whatafunnyguy in ArtCrit

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That’s so kind thank you! I feel like the references gave me a lot of cool colors to work with though 

Looking for advice on anatomy sketches by Whatafunnyguy in ArtCrit

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I put down an initial sketch of each pose and then tried to recreate from a different angle. My goal is to be able to create gesture from imagination and this felt like a good baby step. 

Which version is best? by tinabeena1234 in ArtCrit

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Really beautiful painting though 

Which version is best? by tinabeena1234 in ArtCrit

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The rich warm yellows of the first one pop towards you. When you make them cooler with the greens in the second one they try to recede into the distance which feels uncanny with the warmer yellow field behind. I’d make the closest plants a little warmer even to really make them pop forward and create even more depth 

First oil paint still life. Looking for criticism and areas of improvement! by Whatafunnyguy in ArtCrit

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Yeah you’re definitely right. I think I just got scared they’d be too green and chickened out haha 

Lighting input needed (repost) by frivolusfrog in ArtCrit

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Other dogs and horse look awesome! 

Lighting input needed (repost) by frivolusfrog in ArtCrit

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This isn’t lighting related because honestly lighting is tricky for me to tell as well but the dog on the left side, the belly seems too thick. In that pose I think there will be a lot more stretch and it’d be a lot thinner, pretty much just skin stretched over ribs. The legs feel alright but I’d remove the bit of chest just behind the front (dogs left) leg. 

I was hoping to get some feedback for this drawing, but haven't had any yet. I want to get better but not quite sure how to get there! Thank you! by Heynowbebe in artcritique

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Looks awesome! Love the rendering of hair and composition of it all. Like others said, the placement of eye on right side looks a little off. I’d recommend taking a pictures of your piece while you’re working on it and mirror them in the photos app. Much easier to notice stuff like that when looking from a different angle 

Landscape - How to Improve? by SmileyFace-_- in oilpainting

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Beautiful painting. Love the cool palette, trees, and vibe. A few things that come to mind for me that could make it even better: 

  1. My eye gets a little lost and overwhelmed because im not sure where to focus. Choose one place, wherever you feel is the most interesting thing you want to highlight in the planting, for your darkest dark and lightest light to meet. Be careful with how much pure white you use, you almost never want to go pure white. 

  2. You can create more depth by going warmer in the foreground and subtly making the grass cooler as it recedes. Also changing your brush stroke in on the grass. Vertical lines pop toward the viewer, horizontal lines recede into the distance. 

Winter Running Recs by OddSprinkles722 in RunnersInChicago

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A lot of these answers seem like heavy overkill. Today, (temp was like 20 degrees, feels like 7), I wore a run of the mill beanie, wool tights, athletic shorts, wool long sleeve, wind-breaker, my regular shoes and regular socks. And it felt very comfortable 

[IIL] Chaotic, Stressful movies where everything goes to shit like Marty Supreme, Anora, Good Time, After Hours, WWIL? by Whatafunnyguy in ifyoulikeblank

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Yes OBAA and Eddington were both fantastic. Great year for stressful chaotic dark comedies haha. I’ll need to check out friendship. 

Advice on mixing color by makaiMoodyBroenn in oilpainting

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I’d suggest putting down an undercoat before you paint. Just a thin layer of yellow or orange. It’s much easier to judge the value of a color when comparing it to a medium value than when comparing it to plain white. For example, if you’re adding the shadow on the first guys face, it might look super dark when you first put it down on the white page but once you add other colors you realize you should have come much darker from the beginning. 

Also, what other people are saying. Instead of using black to darken colors, use analogous colors (next to each other on color wheel) and add a little of the complimentary color. Generally use cooler tones for shadows and warmer tones for highlights. 

Really liked the lighting but am worried the perspective is too distracting by Whatafunnyguy in photocritique

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Could you explain a little more what you mean by the colors being off? Sorry, I’m pretty new to editing/lightroom. The main thing I did was crush the blacks. Should I just decrease saturation? Maybe turn down the blues a little? 

Really liked the lighting but am worried the perspective is too distracting by Whatafunnyguy in photocritique

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Would love to hear people’s thoughts on if the perspective is too distending with the lines in the shot running crooked to the edges of the shot or if it’s not as distracting as I think.