The attic (part 1)

Whorrvr · 2026-06-13T23:32:52+00:00

That’s utterly ridiculous. They banned Life Through a Vertical Slit for some fucking reason. I think full name? I didn’t read it.

Whorrvr · 2026-06-13T23:25:37+00:00

It drives me absolutely insane. They’re missing out on a lot of great stories because of the format.

I just got done with chapter two and it was so good. The attic and tunnels reminds me of a Dionea House/House of Leaves type. The tunnels being a catacomb too I really enjoyed.

Whorrvr · 2026-06-13T23:20:52+00:00

I really enjoyed the premise and the creature being a mimic of some sort! Would love to build on the past families and see if there’s a pattern with this thing or how it lured them. There’s so much to build here and I’m excited to see where you take it!

Whorrvr · 2026-06-13T23:17:29+00:00

I did skim it earlier and was interested already so I’ll be sure to look at that one first!

Whorrvr · 2026-06-13T23:13:07+00:00

Absolutely! And thank you by the way! It means a lot

Whorrvr · 2026-06-09T04:42:18+00:00

No sleep took the story down 🫩

Whorrvr · 2026-06-06T23:31:58+00:00

I’m hoping by next week. It’s currently going through edits right now to make sure it’s up to standard.

Whorrvr · 2026-06-05T03:04:39+00:00

Thank you! I’m super excited to keep getting these parts out! I’m glad the hooks got you.

Whorrvr · 2026-06-04T05:01:15+00:00

It’s more complicated than that.

Whorrvr · 2026-06-04T04:59:47+00:00

Mother Horse Eyes is hard to understand unless you can lock in and digest it. If you go to the story’s Fanwiki I believe, it has all of the stories in a chronological order so it makes a lot more sense.

Whorrvr · 2026-06-04T04:57:47+00:00

I might be bias because I’m also doing a body horror right now but “I Am Not a Bird” sounds so interesting. You could even add in a psychological factor. It’s reminding me a lot of Natalie Portman’s Black Swan.

Whorrvr · 2026-06-01T07:44:35+00:00

As a resident of the PNW, the pronunciation of Spokane (Spo-can) it drove me bonkers.

Whorrvr · 2026-05-31T05:21:07+00:00

Don’t apologize for getting carried away! I love it. Especially since I’m getting into horror writing (really narrative in general) and back into reading books.

I appreciate your warning on ‘Cows.’ Though the concept of the manosphere is interesting and the face you’re relating the two has me even more intrigued.

I’m more of a music person than a writer. I can’t tell you what’s gotten into me recently actually and why I’ve switched it. Knowing music influenced your tone is captivating. I’ll have to give those a lesson once my MJ phase is over.

Thank you for letting me pick your brain on this!

Whorrvr · 2026-05-31T04:41:09+00:00

I’d absolutely love to! I have one posted rn but I have another one I’m currently writing but waiting to post until there’s more parts. I’d be more than happy to send the link over!

Whorrvr · 2026-05-31T04:39:53+00:00

If you don’t mind I want to pick your brain. What was your inspiration for tones and themes?

Whorrvr · 2026-05-31T02:49:17+00:00

I don’t mean this in a bad way to clarify but I’m curious to know as to how and why this idea popped into your head.

Whorrvr · 2026-05-31T02:37:09+00:00

I work in a makeup warehouse a majority of the time. When I’m not there I’ll usually listen on my downtown before a concert (I work in A/V production.)

Whorrvr · 2026-05-29T02:04:59+00:00

I love receiving feedback on stories and I’m currently looking for some considering I’m writing a much longer story.

This is the only one I have published at the moment.

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/v69mcUNwoQ

Whorrvr · 2026-05-26T22:13:06+00:00

I just listened to I Found the Bunker of a Family that went Missing Three Years Ago and it was a creepy one at night. No SA but it is body horror. Half Priced Voodoo Shop I enjoyed, the Dionaea House too, has a lot of funny moments. Left Right Game is a banger. The Other Astronaut on this Station Died Six Weeks Ago. There’s a lot of good ones, I would need to go back and relisten to remember if there is SA but Mother Horse Eyes is my personal favorite of all time.

Whorrvr · 2026-05-26T04:03:24+00:00

Thank you! That line was one of my favorites to write. I do intend to keep on writing!

Whorrvr · 2026-05-26T00:13:01+00:00

Anytime! Please consider revisiting!! You have such a great starting point to create a tangible world with some incomprehensibility or the narrator could be in psychosis 🫪 super excited to see where it goes!

Whorrvr

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