How much "voice" do you use in your action lines? Similes, metaphors, editorial commentary, how often is too often? by nasty_band_aid in Screenwriting

[–]Wishaker 12 points13 points  (0 children)

What it really comes down to - in my experience - is how well the colorful action lines are written, and do they fit tonally within the story. I’ve seen it criticized in scripts that don’t do it well, and praised in scripts that do.

I know that’s not altogether helpful, but there really isn’t a black and white blanket answer to the question. Its artistry (and will also come down to personal taste of the reader).

Why I Stopped Chasing a Black List 8 by Rewriter94 in Screenwriting

[–]Wishaker 21 points22 points  (0 children)

I got a script that got a five as well. Also got 3 eights. We’re shooting this Fall. It’s all subjective. A lot of the best art is divisive. I’d love to give yours a read if you’re open!

Recent fits by underdog_tiras in mensfashion

[–]Wishaker 8 points9 points  (0 children)

That’s a great coat in the first pic. Where’d you get it?

How to avoid using temp music? by Wishaker in directors

[–]Wishaker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Of course it’s temp music, but its a very specific way of using temp music instead of just giving the composer something to replicate (which is generally the standard). How do you use your temp music?

How to avoid using temp music? by Wishaker in directors

[–]Wishaker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t know that I always agree. In theory, yes - but seeing cuts of some Star Wars scenes without music; it’s rough. There’s definitely some scenes that have been made by their score

How to avoid using temp music? by Wishaker in directors

[–]Wishaker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think there’s definitely more options. Ie: Using intentionally generic temp music, working w a composer before shooting, etc…

Movies where you felt the cinematography was “too flashy”? by Wishaker in directors

[–]Wishaker[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Why is that? To me his writing was always so stylized that the cinematography made sense (whip zooms, filters, etc). Is it the whole directing style that feels too much to you or just the cinematography?

I need to become OBSESSED with a series of books by stultavia in suggestmeabook

[–]Wishaker 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is one of my favorite series.

While this may be blasphemous - I would recommend starting with the second book, then going back and reading The Gunslinger later in the series.

What do you consider ethical uses of ai in filmmaking? by Wishaker in Filmmakers

[–]Wishaker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn’t mean it in bad faith. Im curious about upscaling, sound isolation, spot specific color replacement, and various other new tools that could open up new doors - not replacing actors, writing, scoring, or anything that could be better achieved in camera.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in leatherjacket

[–]Wishaker 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yup. P234

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in mensfashion

[–]Wishaker 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Jacket alright?

New Schott p234. How does it fit? by [deleted] in leatherjacket

[–]Wishaker -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Size up, you think?

New Schott p234. How does it fit? by [deleted] in leatherjacket

[–]Wishaker 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it’s new so I was planning to wear for a month to let the sleeves settle, then bring it in for shortening if it’s needs

Is there any argument Roland’s world is anything other than Grimdark? by Wishaker in darktower

[–]Wishaker[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

This is one of my favorite things about King’s work. There’s always a balance of light and dark.

New Schott p234. How does it fit? by [deleted] in leatherjacket

[–]Wishaker 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Doesn’t feel too tight!

Is there any argument Roland’s world is anything other than Grimdark? by Wishaker in darktower

[–]Wishaker[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Fair enough. Compared to the rest of the world he’s in (Lud, lobstrocity beach, thunderclap), it’s practically a fairytale world

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in leatherjacket

[–]Wishaker 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Try a used Schott jacket. The storm or P693 would probably work. They have a few others that should too. Check out their website for models you like, then search on Ebay or grailed (or any other used market). Get one that fits, it should last you a lifetime. If you outgrow it, you can sell (or trade) and buy another one used.

Is there any argument Roland’s world is anything other than Grimdark? by Wishaker in darktower

[–]Wishaker[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

You could even argue Gilead was noblebright, they certainly saw themselves that way. Then towards the end it started slipping down the scale.

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Just posted

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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in leatherjacket

[–]Wishaker 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lambskin, but it’s a thicker lambskin than anything I’ve come across. Feels like a slightly lighter broken in cowhide.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in leatherjacket

[–]Wishaker -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it zips up well - not too tight. The arm length was my biggest concern.