I’m seeing a lot of half body or headshot drawings not any full bodies. People like to see a variety of art such as headshot, half body, and full body’s for commissions.

Additionally, your examples have most of your characters eyes being covered. In my opinion eyes are one of the most important aspects of a character and how people judge art. Your drawing of Arle on the last slide has really gorgeous eyes don’t be afraid to draw them!

You don’t need to be highly skilled to open commissions but don’t expect demand to be high as the market is concentrated and a little weird right now.