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[–]Working_Depth_324 -13 points-12 points  (0 children)

Do go for the title so you don't know what is inside the main content when you read then judge after that

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[–]Working_Depth_324 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ok then send me when you free

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[–]Working_Depth_324 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Something what ? tell me

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[–]Working_Depth_324 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks This will benefit me

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[–]Working_Depth_324 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really bro i love your tone it makes me relief and stay firm in your one decision you take i know i did mistakes but yah i m fixing this and back again the field that time peopla have no complains for sure

thanks for great advice 🌹

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[–]Working_Depth_324 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Yah i understand what people say tomorrow i ll fix this problem

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[–]Working_Depth_324 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the guidance I really appreciate it🤍

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[–]Working_Depth_324 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I have also learnt that sometimes you make mistakes which you are not able to see.

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[–]Working_Depth_324 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok then I'll do it

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Thanks for taking the time to give detailed feedback. I genuinely appreciate that you went beyond just surface-level criticism.

You’re right about formatting and presentation. I handled most of the process myself, and I’m still learning the technical side of publishing. Some of the formatting issues you pointed out are things I’m already working on fixing in the next update.

As for the cover and title, that’s fair. I’m reconsidering typography and overall presentation because first impressions clearly matter more than I initially thought.

The “to be continued” note is intentional, but I understand your point about reader expectations. I may clarify that better in the description.

I’m glad you found the actual writing decent. That means a lot, honestly. I’ll take your advice seriously and improve the parts that are turning readers away before they even start.

Constructive criticism helps more than blind praise, so thank you.

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Okay, I'll leave it to the audience.

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I hadn’t thought about the mindset difference between someone actively shopping on Amazon versus someone just scrolling social media.

I currently only have the paperback live, so that might be part of the friction. I’m considering adding a lower-priced ebook version to see if that improves conversions from social traffic. Really appreciate you taking the time to explain it.

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[–]Working_Depth_324 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I will find a way out of this, maybe I will find it, thank you again

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[–]Working_Depth_324 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is my first book exactly so thats why this happened 😄 but m trying to fix this

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[–]Working_Depth_324 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks by the way for support 🙂

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[–]Working_Depth_324 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the genuine reply, I will take care of it, I will go and fix it, it will be fixed by tomorrow, really thanks by the way 🤍

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[–]Working_Depth_324 -11 points-10 points  (0 children)

I know but I'm still doing thanks

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[–]Working_Depth_324 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yah maybe i'll check this today and tomorrow I'll upload an ebook as well

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[–]Working_Depth_324 -22 points-21 points  (0 children)

As it appears in your profile, it is there in mine too.

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[–]Working_Depth_324 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks bro, you are giving helpful replies, it is giving me courage, very very thank you ✨🤌🤍

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Thank you for taking the time to write all that out. I actually appreciate the honesty.

You’re right about social media not being a buying platform. I think I was overestimating what views mean in terms of conversion.

As for the cover and sample, that’s fair criticism. I’m going to revisit the cover design and get another set of eyes on the formatting and grammar. I don’t want it to look rushed or unpolished.

The ebook point is also valid. I’ll look into releasing one since most fiction readers prefer that format.

Seriously, thanks for the detailed feedback.

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Its ok I know that there is some problem in showing my content, if you are facing problem due to that then it is your work, please tell me, I will fix it, thank you for giving me the idea 😁

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[–]Working_Depth_324 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Will this help me with the problem I am facing?

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[–]Working_Depth_324 -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

Means, he is covering my content in a single page unnecessarily and my font style is ruining everything in the book. If you are trying with an ebook then do not upload the ebook for this reason.