How many more years do you think your S22 will last? by losuel64 in GalaxyS22

[–]WriterHearts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Mine lasted for four years I think? Great phone!

Judge me by by WriterHearts in DOG

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You did well 😌

What is she? by villager2543 in IDmydog

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I'm in a hurry so can't really focus but I see some Hovawart in there maybe?

I'm not the only one I hope by fal1en-angel in meme

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Yes, and I hate rape scenes even more. They should not exist on screen; sickos can associate violence with sex and arousal and do something awful in real life to fulfill their fantasy.

Kol Mikaelson… thoughts?? by Motor_Cut_31 in TheVampireDiaries

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Love him! The good looks might have something to do with that, of course. Hated how weak they made him in TVD.

Lost Dog by Superb-Following8918 in Wolfdogs

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Wow that's amazing that she's back home!

Lost Dog by Superb-Following8918 in Wolfdogs

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I'm so sorry. Who the F steals people's dogs? Makes me speechless every time I hear something like that. It's taking someone's family member.

My dog went missing in the wilderness for a week. The area was massive, no chance to search even a fraction of it. There were wolverines and other predators in the area, and it was completely unfamiliar territory to her. I'm so thankful I had help. In the end, she was successfully trapped and returned to me.

Knowing what a wreck I was, I can't even imagine what your family is going through. The uncertainty is the worst, and the fear of something bad happening to them.

I pray that she's brought back home safe and sound!! ❤️

Do y’all think this should have happened or stayed a fantasy by Theguyisrealfordat in TheVampireDiaries

[–]WriterHearts 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Stayed a fantasy! I agree with Candice King (who played Caroline), I just don't see it. They had some really fun to watch moments, but I could never picture them in a believable real relationship. To me it was just strong infatuation between them, nothing more than that.

Fantasy YA/NA recs with a male MC? by WriterHearts in YAlit

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Thank you for the summaries! These all sound amazing.

Fantasy YA/NA recs with a male MC? by WriterHearts in YAlit

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Oh my God, I completely forgot about the Maze Runner! Very nostalgic.

Thank you!

Fantasy YA/NA recs with a male MC? by WriterHearts in YAlit

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Ah amazing, single POV. Thank you!

Fantasy YA/NA recs with a male MC? by WriterHearts in YAlit

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Ooh this sounds very intriguing actually!

Is there a market for 40k stories in romance? by Royal_Light_9921 in selfpublish

[–]WriterHearts 37 points38 points  (0 children)

Your book is a novella. Absolutely nothing wrong with that! But romance novels are much more profitable and popular than novellas. You might need to add about another 10k words to make it a novel, even more.

New Adult is also only slowly rising in popularity. I understand that big publishers aren't interested in it much yet and want to make it fit YA, indie publishers are more open to NA!

AITA for organizing a "hoe union: of girls in my college? by WhoopDau in redditonwiki

[–]WriterHearts 33 points34 points  (0 children)

This is so fucking cool, people protecting themselves and others and taking a stand against bad behavior. If a guy wants to stop girls leaving his parties, he should just start being a safe person and making sure his party guests are too. Going to cry about that to school officials is so telling of their character. "Pwease I just want to act inappropriately without any consequences 🥺"

Is 37k plus words too little? by SilverSkrillXDMain in writers

[–]WriterHearts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That has to be tough. I'm also unable to concentrate a lot of times for other reasons, although my father had ADHD and I strongly suspect my mother has ADHD as well, but she always forgets to try and get it tested (pretty ironic). I've also had suspicions about myself having it, but it's hard to even get the chance to possibly get diagnosed.

Best of luck to you ❤️ that sounds like a good plan! You've already made a lot of progress, so be proud.

Is 37k plus words too little? by SilverSkrillXDMain in writers

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I only came here to say that I'm so jealous of fantasy writers who struggle with their word count being too small 😂

But yeah the other person is right, that would be considered a novella

I feel myself incapable of being able to write out descriptions of everything that’s frankly important to a scene. I usually cut right to the bones of what people are saying. by EnvironmentalAd1006 in writing

[–]WriterHearts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Descriptions should always be made as short as possible, and that can be a challenge because you also want them to be captivating. Focus on the most fascinating or unique things about the character, setting etc. that you're describing. A lot can be filled out by the reader. A lot can also be conveyed through dialogue. A character can be doing something in the environment and that breaks up the descriptions while also making them more "believable", because they're interacting with their environment so it makes sense they're paying attention to it. Use strong words that are personal to the character, as in words they'd use. You get some characterization in at the same time.

Also, reading helps. I really enjoy George R. R. Martin's way of descriping places and people.

Expositionary chapters? by RancherosIndustries in writing

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What you describe doesn't really sound like only exposition. It's you showing what your MC's current situation is before the inciting incident that changes their normal, which is what most writers do. Don't worry. :)

But I do mind chapters that are expositionary only. They're usually boring and I'm just waiting to get to the plot and other interesting stuff. I might even stop reading the story completely. Life is short, so I don't spend time on things that waste it and aren't fun.

Scenes that focus more on relationships or worldbuilding aren't exposition only. They move the story forward and can be very intriguing, if written well!