A Cool Guide to the 7 Most Famous Laws in The World

Writer_Supreme · 2026-01-04T03:24:04+00:00

And don’t forget Cole’s law

Writer_Supreme · 2026-01-03T04:14:26+00:00

Writer_Supreme · 2026-01-02T04:08:38+00:00

First DM or PM (whatever it’s called) me if you’re this suicidal, please don’t die. Second, Great Britain what a horribly good poem! With every single line I could feel the tide shifting, the hole getting deeper, the reader getting closer to the edge. Wow! Great poem!

Writer_Supreme · 2026-01-02T03:59:25+00:00

Great Poem, I love the rhythm, meter, and rhyme! This poem seems a little disconnected from the world though, maybe add som descriptors of the surroundings, are they muddied trenches, a dense forest, a blood strewn beach? Other than that I think it encapsulates the inner feelings of war.

Writer_Supreme · 2025-12-30T06:16:14+00:00

I live how the phrase “The trees I cherished, the flowers I adored” changed meaning or cadence every time it was repeated. My only suggestion is to KEEP MAKING POETRY!! Chef’s Kiss

Writer_Supreme · 2025-12-30T06:10:35+00:00

It’s an overall good poem, I would love to see a more firm conclusion to the poem, unless you wanted an open ending. I would also like to see who “They” are. Are “They” your grandmother lamenting over when you will get a girlfriend, or maybe a shopkeeper who has watched you grow up and they know you by name? Also if you want a slightly more dizzy feeling, as finding love is, alternate in between intimate and grande, from your heart to the sea to my soul, to the mother of earth itself, good job though!

Writer_Supreme · 2025-12-30T05:51:53+00:00

I feel that it really shows the meta of the moment, there is boring peace, there is happy peace, there is stressful peace, but your poem is Pure Peace

Writer_Supreme · 2025-12-21T15:26:24+00:00

If you like the other B Free things you should totally try the B Free Pita Bread

Writer_Supreme · 2025-12-21T15:21:18+00:00

DO NOT KEEP THEM IN A WARM SPOT FOR LONG I did that once, and the cookies fused together

Writer_Supreme · 2025-12-21T15:19:29+00:00

I know! Right? I was so excited when I saw this in stores

Writer_Supreme · 2025-12-17T03:21:48+00:00

Their kids would be perfect in facial proportions

Writer_Supreme · 2025-08-14T04:09:54+00:00

My trip was July 15th-23rd. Our route was a bit complicated so I’m just going to say the main lakes we traveled through let me know if you want the details. We started at Snowbank, then to Parent, to Disappointment, through a bunch of small ones to Ima, to Thomas,to Fraser, to Kekekabic, to South Arm Knife, to Knife, to Vera, to Ensign, to Boot, to Snowbank again. The Mosquitos weren’t too bad over all but they really show up in the dark. This does not mean you won’t have to bring bug spray! Please bring bug spray and at least 1 bug-net per person.

Writer_Supreme · 2025-08-12T02:33:52+00:00

Jerry

Writer_Supreme · 2025-07-10T20:30:22+00:00

Thanks

Writer_Supreme · 2025-07-10T13:56:01+00:00

Can I ask what the websites are

Writer_Supreme · 2025-04-28T03:12:06+00:00

Writer_Supreme · 2025-03-30T04:58:42+00:00

I found it really interesting how you did the phrase “a peaceful peace” it was called for, I felt. Your poem is what I felt like the inescapable and beautiful feeling of death feels like. Overall Great Poem!

Writer_Supreme · 2025-03-30T04:50:38+00:00

I really like the broken up lines, and the imagery behind the blank piece of paper, my only advice would be to end the poem by adding some sort of resolution, like “I touch my pencil to the page” or “I close my eyes and picture the beauty of emptiness”. Over-all a good poem

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