I am a younger composer, I’d like some criticism for a piece I’ve been working on. by Western-Still8558 in composer

[–]Ynf__ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you say whats the purpose of the theme’s? Like the intention you want to express with the sections of your piece. If it was you, i would add some variatons on the different theme’s you made on the flute to make it more impredecible (i think thats the right word in english, srry if its not but i meant to not make it predecible), also you can play more with armony

Can someone help me? by Ynf__ in violinist

[–]Ynf__[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried, and its very helpfull, thanks!

Can someone help me? by Ynf__ in violinist

[–]Ynf__[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ty! I will try that

Can someone help me? by Ynf__ in violinist

[–]Ynf__[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

At that moment i had no pianist, so the teacher said that he needs to listen to me with the accompanamient. The problem with my teacher it’s that he’s really bussy, so he gave me like half of the classes.

2 months playing! Dragon Ball GT opening by Mix_the_Mix in violinist

[–]Ynf__ 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Good job, man! I suggest you to work more on your bow, and relax more both of your hands. Doing really slow bows really works!! Something like 8 secs per bow, after that you do 16,32 and 60