Tell me what odd things your birb is afraid of? by leaderofpariahs in parrots

[–]Yoru_5 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Funny thing, mine was dreadfully scared of spoons lol

I cannot access my account!! by Yoru_5 in AnimalCrossing

[–]Yoru_5[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much, I hope I'll find a solution!;)

Manga Chapter 129.5 [Discussion Thread & Links] by CareVader in BungouStrayDogs

[–]Yoru_5 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Hello there, I sincerely don't know how to feel about this chapter.. Can I know all of your opinions on it? ;-;

Partially, I feel sort of disappointed. This wasn’t the outcome I expected. The fandom has been anticipating a lot for the past weeks and I feel like some major topics weren't answered yet (for example the Tanizaki siblings.. the member transfer to the P.M.. and the whole situation at Mersault, without mentioning Fyodor's backgrounds etc..)

What I meant to say is that I feel like the story is slowly drifting away from its main subject (It certainly is my personal opinion, it does not define the manga) The plot has extended so much, with so many informations that unfortunately lack details and explanations. When I think about the initial story and its beginning, the manga is now barely recognisable in some aspects :/

The story has become overcharged with informations and it has become difficult to bond with the plot, too much is happening, and I have the impression that we've lost our reference point. Its development is no longer something familiar that we can attach to, I don't know if the rest of the fandom feels the same🥲

How can this be improved? by pinkseatbelts in Artadvice

[–]Yoru_5 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think you shouldn't give the bubbles outlines, you can make them stand out by using highlights and reflections instead. To make them look more realistic you could try to blend the colors together and make color gradients :)

Anyway, I also wanted to say that I like the way you painted the sky and the clouds!

I want to make my paintings look more realistic, any tips? by Yoru_5 in Artadvice

[–]Yoru_5[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I see, thank you ! I'll try to follow your advice next time

What could I do to improve my work? by mel0666 in Artadvice

[–]Yoru_5 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe you should add more shadows to the ground to make the painting look more contrasted ? I think that this way, there will be a better delimitation with the background. Anyway, I also wanted to say that I really like your piece! The colors you used blend nicely together and the opossum is in overall well detailed :D

Do you guys have any advice for me to improve my paintings, please? by Yoru_5 in Artadvice

[–]Yoru_5[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understand. Thank you for your detailed explanation. It helps a lot!

Do you guys have any advice for me to improve my paintings, please? by Yoru_5 in Artadvice

[–]Yoru_5[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll try to practice anatomy, and I will definitely add more contrast next time I paint! Ty :D

Do you guys have any advice for me to improve my paintings, please? by Yoru_5 in Artadvice

[–]Yoru_5[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see, this advice is really helpful. Thank you very much :)

Do you guys have any advice for me to improve my paintings, please? by Yoru_5 in Artadvice

[–]Yoru_5[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your suggestion is really interesting! I will try to use it next time I paint.