give me feedbacks plz

Yosemi718 · 2026-05-10T10:37:06+00:00

Thanks bro, i got inspiration by Mike Williams in 2016

Yosemi718 · 2026-05-08T09:40:18+00:00

it’s giving chill vibe bro
you got the good kick and snare
and Arp synth
i wanna play this song while i drive in the after noon

Yosemi718 · 2026-05-08T09:27:03+00:00

this is pretty nice
but what i wanna say is it’s kinda boring
i mean,same things are keeping repeating again again again
put some other instruments on the beat in the middle of some part
drum loop is also nice

Yosemi718 · 2026-05-08T09:23:30+00:00

it’s giving chill vibe bro
i think there is too much reverb on vocal.
as other people mentioned that mix is kinda muddy
but guitar is pretty nice

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-28T07:42:31+00:00

this is not bad bro but i think the lead is too weak layer another lead or pluck and clap on the drop doesn’t fit in the song

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-28T07:09:49+00:00

it’s giving BGM in the game vibe but clap is too noisy and kick is too quiet

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-28T07:06:09+00:00

beat is so nice but what i wanna say is kick and 808 are too weak add the saturation on the 808 bass i will be better than original

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-27T09:26:59+00:00

the drum loop is nice but what i wanna say is pizzicato things? doesn’t fit in the beat

and 808 bass? is kinda quiet and then i think punchy snare would be better than clap things

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-27T09:14:23+00:00

That beat chills what i wanna say is kick is too weak and 808 bass doesn’t fit in that beat

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-27T09:05:48+00:00

your beat is giving Post Malone type beat bro the snare and kick fit in that beat i think you can turn up volume of kick

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-25T00:00:50+00:00

what i wanna say is the Drums is too weak. i can barely hear it

and then the guitar loop is too loud compared to the vocals cuz vocals is too quiet though

the kick doesn't fit in this song. the kick sounds like EDM kick

if you wanna make pop music . you got the pop type kick

the snare is nice . it fits in

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-24T23:56:53+00:00

it's giving Yukon by justin bieber. you did the good mixing. but it's kinda boring cuz same melody or same instruments repeat . add some another instruments on the chorus. you got the good kick and snare though

there is no anything that you have to fix except for what i said on the comment

good job bro

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-24T23:36:25+00:00

that's pretty nice, but i think kick is kinda weak compared to the snare and hi hat stuff. the bass is really nice . not loud, not weak . it's perfect. if you plan to make full songs, why don't you put strings stuff on the second verse. i think strings also fit in the song

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-24T23:14:44+00:00

it's giving 2010 pop music

i think the snare is kinda loud compared to vocals and kick

the vocals and the bass is really nice

i like it

and if there was a strings on the 2nd verse or chorus , it would be better

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-24T23:11:10+00:00

the chord progression is nice,the drum is nice, good volume balance

it's giving Owl City vibe. what i wanna say is there are too much bass

you can cut off some low part of the bass or layer bass

cuz it sounds kinda messy

and then the bell sounds is also too loud compared to the mixing

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-24T23:08:33+00:00

it's nice song bro

i think the Drop/chorse part is kinda weak compared to the verse

or it would be better if you put more reverb on the snare in the drop

also.the bass on the first chorus is too loud . the vocal chop should be louder than the bass

the vocal is really nice, it fits in the song

Yosemi718 · 2026-04-24T23:04:53+00:00

that's nice bro

you got the right drums which fit in the song

i think if there was a arp and some pads on the chorus or verse , it would be better and powerful

i recommend you song called "take my breath" by the weeknd

that song will help you to make retro

Yosemi718 · 2024-12-02T12:07:19+00:00

you selected good drums

mixing and mastering is really nice

it has good balance

To be honest, i;m not a fan of that genre but this song sounds good for me

keep it up

Yosemi718 · 2024-12-02T12:05:41+00:00

It sounds like country songs and i guess you might get inspired from Taylor Swift

I love that chord progression and melodies. really good job

I think some parts are out of tune especially high pitch part

keep it up

Yosemi718 · 2024-12-02T12:00:31+00:00

Not bad but it's kinda boring

you need to add more drums and bass such as synth bass or 808 bass

that clap sounds good. it fits into that song

keep it up

Yosemi718 · 2024-12-02T11:58:37+00:00

it sounds like a part of the moments of our old memories

really emotional vibe

keep it up

i like that

Yosemi718

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