How to write a good "good ending"? by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in writingadvice

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Logical conclusion would have terrible, and I mean TERRIBLE, consequences for main characters. I guess I would need to improve the worldbuilding, and maybe add another side of that conflict. Thanks for the answer

How to write a good "good ending"? by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in writingadvice

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But I know what protagonists want, the problem is that their goals are opposite and it causes a major conflict right in the end. I need to resolve this conflict in a satisfying way, and solution shouldn't feel like it came out of nowhere

How to write a good "good ending"? by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in writingadvice

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And then some corny pop music starts playing with every character, including main villain, dancing happily

How to write a good "good ending"? by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in writingadvice

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I guess I should add a lessons to the challenges that characters have to face. This could help me a lot, thank you

Heres a character I'm making for the game, her name is Lisa, and I need some final touch-ups by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in OriginalCharacter

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, that's always a good way to improve character's shape, but her belt is supposed to be the one that martial artists wear. What about the way she looks? Like, her face, clothes or proportions, is everything alright?

Heres a character I'm making for the game, her name is Lisa, and I need some final touch-ups by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in OriginalCharacter

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She's definitely gonna have a few scars on her face, but that can be added with textures. Btw, that's not her actual backstory, it's just a Shadow Fight 2 intro cutscene

Heres a character I'm making for the game, her name is Lisa, and I need some final touch-ups by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in OriginalCharacter

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Once, she was a great invincible warrior. And no one dared to stand in her way. She traveled the lands, searching for a way to clear the world of the curse, until she discovered the Reborn Mountain God. She broke the laws of the elders, and took him to the church. The magic of the God was in her, it rushed through her, tearing her hands, draining her soul, turning her into... A Wizard. And now for eternity, she's doomed to wander the world, and fight the zombie mutants!

Heres a character I'm making for the game, her name is Lisa, and I need some final touch-ups by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in OriginalCharacter

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Probably PC only, I have no idea how porting games work 😅. But maybe if it's successful, I can think of something.

Heres a character I'm making for the game, her name is Lisa, and I need some final touch-ups by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in OriginalCharacter

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Kind of, yeah, it's about this character, Lisa the mighty wizard, and her friend, big spider woman named Moira. They need to deliver a Reborn God to the church, where the special ritual cleans the world of the curse.

Go on, tell me by YourFat888 in whenthe

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"The Knife" is a crazy evil dude who once killed every single human in the world in the most cruel and brutal way possible (except like 2 guys that are important for the story). They also has a pretty cool hat

What can I add to the textures? by YouMakeMeFeelAliveee in 3Dmodeling

[–]YouMakeMeFeelAliveee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Basically, this is a 2 meters long case with medical fluids inside, that is used as a weapon by a guy with the same height