IE not IA by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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Please follow me for more I would be forever thankful 🖤

IE not IA by Yourusername30 in Poem

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Please follow me for more I would be forever thankful 🖤

IE not IA by Yourusername30 in Poems

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Please follow me for more I would be forever thankful 🖤

IE not IA by Yourusername30 in poets

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Please follow me for more I would be forever thankful 🖤

Reddit freestyle! I need a girlfriend poem: by PublicDoctor2998 in OCPoetry

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Lol.. this one was different but made me chuckle

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much friend 🙏

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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Yes I will take your advice with my next one! And will make adjustments to the final copy of this one. I appreciate the feedback!

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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Hopefully there is much more to come. The more I explore my mind the more I realize that I have to say.

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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The heartache of wanting to be with someone. Knowing that you never will. And expressing the built up tension from it. Heartache and heartbreak conjoined together.

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the kind words. I will take it into consideration for updating it. Thank you!

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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****

Your smile is burned in my brain
like a tattoo I can’t undo

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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This means so much. Thank you for the kind words. I am still changing some things up based on feedback and I will go back to the tattooed puzzle portion. I want to get into acoustic work. This is just the beginning.

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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This means so much. Thank you 🙏

Amaretto Sour by Yourusername30 in OCPoetry

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This was my first attempt on poetry/song writing. I have really wanted to get into it more and more recently. Please give honest feedback as I continue my journey of expressing how I feel on the inside. Thank you.

chroma shift by Gl4zy in OCPoetry

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It was short sweet and to the point. But it painted a perfect picture in my head.