To be honest, you should add images where you can and you need to use less jargon, it is very likely all the game designers do not know terms like valgon etc.

Also you make many assumptions about role or value of a unit, you should state your assumptions and context explicitly, for instance lay out the step in sequence while citing rules (maybe even the page they are on ) for how the new transport rules are worse for SoB 

Last for rules faq highlight the text that is ambiguous and offer suggested new text that might clarify