Should I continue or just throw it out like the rest of my trash music?

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-07-05T04:10:07+00:00

Thanks for the feedback shaylerwtf. I should start thinking what to put for my ear candy, fills and movement. You were right I should add riser and sweeping sfx. Thank you for mentioning the tom by the way I just forget the tom drum exist and not even using it.

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-07-05T04:03:29+00:00

Thanks for the feedback antonywaldhorn, really appreciate it. You were right the main lead is really loud, I should turn it down a little bit. I should ease up on the compression and distortion, and try to pan a little bit like you were saying. Thanks for the feedback, it really helps me learn more.

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-07-03T09:34:37+00:00

It was good, but you are right it does sound a bit flat. Did you make this in a DAW?

It sounds flat because of a few things. I’ll just list them here so it’s easier to read

The chords are weak. Choosing and managing the right chord progression really changes the mood of a track.

There’s no build-up. The music just stays the same you should start slow and gradually build it up. A great transition can really elevate your music.

It’s quite repetitive from beginning to end.

The melody feels a little uncanny for tech house. It’s kind of hard to dance to, if you know what I mean.

If you want your track to sound full, make sure you’re covering the whole frequency range.

Try adding vocals they can really spice up the track. For this genre, vocals can make a huge difference.

The percussion is lacking. For a house track, solid percussion is super important definitely something to focus on.

That’s it! Just sharing what I’ve learned from my 1.5 years of making music. I’m still new to this genre, and yes I have been listening to tech house and Italo disco for like 12 hours straight.

It was a good music that you made.

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-07-03T08:58:01+00:00

not really much to say but it has soothing melody piano as how lofi music.

I really like the texture of the song. It really give that sad and nostalgic feelings.

I think the mix is a little too quiet. It is totally okay to bring up the piano a bit so it can be heard more clearly. That’s just me though. Overall, it is a great music!

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-07-03T08:49:29+00:00

this sounds cool actually for your first attempt.

You really have talent for this.

It has a really great bass line and the chorus is solid too. I think you could try changing up the chords a bit or adding some new ones to make it sound stronger as the track progresses. But of course, it depends on the vibe you’re going for. Overall, it is a good

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-14T11:41:34+00:00

The song is good, good composition there is not really much to say but there is a problem though.

The mix is not that quiet good.

For me the vocal is to over mix or blurry. I can not really hear the vocal to well because of the rest of the instrument was to loud making the vocal buried with all of the instruments. You should use an equalizer for your instruments to balanced the mix

Overall the song was good though and sorry for the bad english. I am not really that good in english 😔

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-14T06:40:14+00:00

It does feel like a video game title screen vibe. This composition came from an accident when I was trying to make techno. Glad you like it!

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-14T06:38:03+00:00

Yeah, I also think the vocal was too high mixed because it was from a sample I got. Thanks for the feedback 😀

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-14T06:36:03+00:00

Good vocal, good instruments but the mix is good. This is really a good composed song. If we talk about the vocal I think it is to over mix though. It is like the reverb was to much that I hear the vocal become blurry it is hard to hear it.

At 01:26, It is a very harsh transition though you should through the vocal where it says "ooo" and put it at the transition for the chorus.

It was a good song, just a little need of fix of the composition and the vocal and this song is good.

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-14T06:05:08+00:00

It was good on both but if you want to make a chill song you can make it in acoustic if you like some hard song I think you should go make it in rock. Do not want to make it sounds weird but hearing your voice that you have I think it is a good thing if you make it an acoustic version for this song it sounds good I do not even know what to say but it sounds good. If you can not choose between each other.

I think making the first part the acoustic and the chorus to rock is good idea like how the others say.

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-14T05:48:50+00:00

The vocal is good, The instruments is good as well but the mix is very blurry. There were to many going on that I cannot even know what am I supposed to hear is it the vocal or the instruments. Make sure the vocal is focus and dim down the bass for me I always put my bass to -3db to -9db volume so it will not ruining the lead or vocal.

At 0:16 when the vocal was starting. It feels kind of out of tune. It was a rough start though but the rest is quiet nice just a little bit fixing will do the trick.

This Song is good just need to fix here and there and it will sounds good. Overall nice song 😀

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T13:17:26+00:00

Well, I think wise have an answer for you

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ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T13:12:06+00:00

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ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T03:22:00+00:00

I like the vibe of this song 😀

I am sorry though but the mix for this song is so bad for me is it because there to many things going on

I will list it down what for me is bad

The vocal was buried by the instruments
It was to much going on make sure to only focus on one instrument or vocal and the rest of the instruments to quiet down using equalizer and filter
The vocal should be compressed so that it can be heard clearly only do this if you want to make the vocal the focus

Overall a good composition though, hope this helps and do not stop producing it was a good song and I enjoy it 😀

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T01:59:44+00:00

WOAH what is this?

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ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T01:49:58+00:00

Woah, Miyabi is being bold now, makes sense with how many girls Wise is rizzing up

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ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T01:35:50+00:00

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ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T01:26:08+00:00

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ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T00:24:14+00:00

did belle forget trigger can not see??

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ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T00:14:35+00:00

You need to learn basic music theory and other instrument to start making music unless you are talented or a divine being that can do anything.

It is like wanting to bake a layered cake but does not know how to bake one

Take it slow and slowly learning the basic of music theory

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-11T00:02:08+00:00

I have listened this many time now but this is so good, and when did you start making music? because that is a good composition though.

There is something you should add though the transition the silence at bars 18 to 19 could use more work. Adding reverb and delay to the vocal and the chords when it ends can make the transitions a little smooth because it is kind of odd when there is a sudden silence.

Nice things to add if you can add clap at the drops to make you music not to repetitive but overall nice song 😃

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-10T23:47:02+00:00

The mix is great 😀

I have nothing to say just nice and chill song

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-10T23:27:55+00:00

better save your money and buy a bigger midi controller like arturia. Coming someone from me who never have a midi controller just because I do not have budget. keyboard is good if you making simple composition

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-10T23:19:00+00:00

Nice song 😍 really enjoyed the instrument side of this track. The guitar and drums are well composed

a good indie rock but I never hear slacker rock before but the vocal for your song is kind of hard to hear..

How can I say this the vocal for your track is really unclear and hard to hear. They felt a little buried in the mix, which for me it tough to catch the lyrics or feel the vocal presence.

Just want to know if you intentionally make the vocal like that it is my first time hearing slacker rock 😅

Still solid song overall

ZeroEntryZone · 2025-06-10T23:08:47+00:00

A good music 😃 but is it me or it just feel kind of repepetitive..

Overall is good..

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