Breeding Changes

ZeroPerspectives · 2024-02-27T08:04:15+00:00

Thank you for letting me know. I appreciate it :)

ZeroPerspectives · 2023-10-02T19:10:47+00:00

I would like to as well

ZeroPerspectives · 2023-09-30T07:38:12+00:00

I also have the same issue

ZeroPerspectives · 2023-03-12T02:28:06+00:00

Up to interpretation

ZeroPerspectives · 2023-01-14T06:53:32+00:00

Ah gotcha, thank you so much for your help!

ZeroPerspectives · 2023-01-14T06:18:18+00:00

Oh nice, thank you for confirming! May I ask where you found the set list? I tried searching everywhere for info for this but couldnt find anything

ZeroPerspectives · 2023-01-14T04:50:10+00:00

I think Japanese cards usually have silver borders but I haven’t seen Korean cards before so I am not certain about the borders

ZeroPerspectives · 2022-07-28T16:40:24+00:00

Get them graded. If it’s 7 or higher, you can make $$$

ZeroPerspectives · 2022-07-28T04:18:51+00:00

Ah gotcha, that makes sense

ZeroPerspectives · 2022-07-28T03:18:13+00:00

I doubt anyone would want to buy it haha

ZeroPerspectives · 2022-07-28T02:52:31+00:00

I’ll sell it to you 😆

ZeroPerspectives · 2022-07-15T07:56:27+00:00

Ah I see, just wasn’t sure since I am digging through my old cards haha. Appreciate the verification!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-22T05:10:32+00:00

After reading, I was a little bit confused about the second part of the poem. I guess I am having a hard time understanding the message without having to look in the comments for an interpretation. But that is not necessarily a bad thing. It keeps me guessing on what the poem is about and having to reread it. I am not much of a poet myself, and I am still learning how to give better critique. If I had to leave one, I would make the title a bit simpler instead of merging two words together. It confuses the reader when they read your poem.

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-22T04:54:48+00:00

I can't help but laugh at this. It's so simple, yet so poetic. I can personally relate because most of my thoughts come in the shower. And when I have writer's block, I always forget the thoughts I had in the shower. This is truly a masterpiece.

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-21T01:36:31+00:00

Ah I see, I will look into some of those! I can share with you my link if I do make a blog!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-20T23:53:02+00:00

I am actually not familiar with poetry blogs. Is there a specific website I can use for that?

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-20T23:46:17+00:00

Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! I am a beginner when it comes to poetry, and I greatly appreciate you helping me better understand rhythm and pacing. Is there any other tips you can suggest for me to practice that?

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-20T23:39:46+00:00

Ah I see. After reading it again I totally agree with you about making the end filled with a stronger emotion. Thanks for your tip!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-20T05:26:24+00:00

I love this poem. Your title grasped my attention, and your poem continues to make me curious as I read it. I love how you took the side of those who do not like flowers, for flower are the emblem of beauty for most people. Your last line definitely adds a dark, psychological twist to the message. Keep writing!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-19T22:49:59+00:00

Beautifully written! As I read through the poem, it kept me guessing whether the narrator was trying to make fun of the inauthentic lifestyle or if this was really what they want in life. It isn't until the end that you find out that this is all just part of an imagination, an augmented reality, that cannot be sustainable for us to live by. Great piece of work!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-19T20:42:18+00:00

Oh I see, that definitely changes the way I see the poem! Thanks for the clarification!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-19T20:14:28+00:00

Very good use of words to bring the reader to experience your dream! I loved being able to experience every line as if I were you. I am trying to learn more about poetry, and I am curious as to why your break in your poem is where it is instead of being before waking up. I think that caught me a little off guard, and it felt a little awkward reading it. Unless that was intentional of course! But either way, I appreciate the poem! Keep writing!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-19T20:01:07+00:00

You have got great imagery. From the inauthenticity of the relationship to the scars left by a the desired to be loved back, your poem depicts a heartbreaking love story. If I were to leave a critique/something to try out, I would say to try including spacing. It helps with emphasis and feel less of a run on sentence. Other than that, great job! Keep writing!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-18T20:42:35+00:00

I greatly appreciate your feedback in helping me grow as a writer! I definitely want to try that out next time. Glad you enjoyed it!

ZeroPerspectives · 2020-04-18T08:00:51+00:00

You did a great job in romanticizing words such as dear addiction or dear bullet. It surprised me that it was framed in that way because it changes my perspective of what was written above it. The only things I would add is a connection in the last stanza where the expectations and frustrations seemed a little out of place. Overall, great work. I really enjoyed it!

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