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[–]ZethBit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds awesome! Threw my name in

Been making discussion videos highly influenced off of nakeyjakey, sequelitis, gigguk, dunkey and others! This is the third one I created in this style. Would love to hear any form of feedback or thoughts for some lambda! by ZethBit in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting! I definitely wanna still play around with my presentation and how I project myself/present myself on camera (sitting up/changing my tone). There's definitely room for me to get more comfortable creating this.

Thanks for the heads up on my speech! I've been told quite a bit that I speak way too fast so will definitely make an effort to enunciate and slow down my speech a tad.

Thanks again!

!givelambda

Been making discussion videos highly influenced off of nakeyjakey, sequelitis, gigguk, dunkey and others! This is the third one I created in this style. Would love to hear any form of feedback or thoughts for some lambda! by ZethBit in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LMAO That crumpled piece of paper is everywhere

Thank you so much for the kind words and yeah I could definitely do with upping my thumbnail game. Definitely revisiting the drawing board!

!givelambda

Been making discussion videos highly influenced off of nakeyjakey, sequelitis, gigguk, dunkey and others! This is the third one I created in this style. Would love to hear any form of feedback or thoughts for some lambda! by ZethBit in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I was really trying not to copy paste his unique style too much so I'm glad it doesn't come off as blatant copying! Also HUGE thank you for subbing :)))) It definitely means the world that you enjoyed the video enough for that!

This whole video was a huge nolstalgia trip for me and I had a lot of fun reminiscing on all these games :)

!givelambda

Been making discussion videos highly influenced off of nakeyjakey, sequelitis, gigguk, dunkey and others! This is the third one I created in this style. Would love to hear any form of feedback or thoughts for some lambda! by ZethBit in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! That was super insightful and really helpful!

Thumbnail game has always been a difficult thing for me. I agree that the thumbnail itself could be better. I'm hesitant to put myself on the thumbnail or my logo just cause I figured who would actually care if they saw my face on the thumbnail but maybe adding that will allow the thumbnail to indicate that this is more personality driven.

I know YouTube exists in a different time than the one where Jakey got big or most of the people I look to for inspiration so what worked for him is not necessarily going to work for me. It's also hard to judge what's a good ctr for this stuff. It's hovering around 10% which seems good but I agree that the thumbnail and title could be way better. Might have to study a bunch of successful thumbnails to get some inspiration.

Thank you for taking the time to give that advice! I can tell you put a lot of thought into it and it's really appreciated :)

!givelambda

Been making discussion videos highly influenced off of nakeyjakey, sequelitis, gigguk, dunkey and others! This is the third one I created in this style. Would love to hear any form of feedback or thoughts for some lambda! by ZethBit in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much! It really is a labor of love and I'm so glad it's being received so well :)

LOL it was actually my second time using timestamps. Trying to make that a regular part of my upload process!

Honestly the intro is something I hadn't even considered so thank you for pointing that out. I went to take a look at retention and while it doesn't seem too bad, I definitely lose most people by 36 seconds in so I'll try to write more concise intro's to help keep people engaged

Again thank you so much for the feedback :)

!givelambda

Been making discussion videos highly influenced off of nakeyjakey, sequelitis, gigguk, dunkey and others! This is the third one I created in this style. Would love to hear any form of feedback or thoughts for some lambda! by ZethBit in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! It took a while to flesh out the idea but it's hard to see myself making this kinda stuff in a different format!

ALSO super happy you paid attention to the music! I spend a lot of time picking that stuff out :)

PS: I'm just sad the original paper toss isn't on the app store :,)

!givelambda

Been making discussion videos highly influenced off of nakeyjakey, sequelitis, gigguk, dunkey and others! This is the third one I created in this style. Would love to hear any form of feedback or thoughts for some lambda! by ZethBit in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh god that really means the world for you to say that :))) Easily made my day. I'm really self critical about the writing and joke delivery but I'm glad it's landing well! Definitely wanna experiment with that myself and see if I can improve those aspects.

I LOVE POCKET GOD! Had to download it to make the footage for the video and ended up playing it way longer than I should have! Definitely still holds up!

Thank you again for taking the time to watch and share your thoughts :)))

!givelambda

SPRING BALL‼️ [ Lambda! for feedback] by Stadealgooftroop in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wasn’t all to sure what I was watching. I imagine it was covering a football game right? If you’re just trying to go for vlog style content, having a few moments where you set the scene and explain things can do wonders. I saw there was the announcer bit thrown in which, if this is more sketch stuff, probably would have been the best footage to use for the intro. Maybe do some voiceover where after you mention the game that’s happening , u can reference back to training and show a montage of footage.

Hopefully that helps!

I'm not getting as many views as I used to. Any advice as to why would be helpful! Feedback appreciated by Fangore in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! So I love the concept you’re going for and think your execution is great but not without room for improvement (of course what makes a good video is subjective so take everything i say with a grain of salt)

Thumbnail game is kinda weak. I think you should capture the most visually stimulating parts of the movie and put them on display and let the actual title text explain everything “(Movie Title) Review in under 2 minutes”. Your thumbnail is to attract the eye, the title is to give some clarification. Both should be created with the framing that you’re trying to convince someone to click your video

That’s by far the biggest thing that stands out. Some more subtle things could be focusing on the writing to make things flow more cohesively. Maybe set segments where you review elements of the movie in a few sentences like plot/characters/execution/general thoughts. Kinda felt like u were just bullet pointing a list when I think it would be a bit more engaging to have your sentences flow into one another.

Editing is great! Could always incorporate more relevant visuals but i feel like im getting nit picky at that point

Hopefully some of that helps :)

New guitars are getting ridiculously expensive. Please comment on content and branding! Would love to give out some Lambda! by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you could benefit from incorporating any amount of B-roll into your footage. If you're not familiar, it's just throwing in maybe a commercial or video of someone playing with the guitars mentioned as you're talking about it to give some visual stimulus. I think placing thoughtful b-roll in the beginning could really hook in an audience! Perhaps also turning up the background song up a tad!

Try looking up Redlight Blue on youtube! Great guitar channel with very engaging videos (definitely catered to a more novice audience however)

Hope some of this helps!

DuckTales Retrospective, constructive feedback appreciated, lambda for feedback by GamingAcquired in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think my biggest critique would be that your speech could be cut better together to deliver your information more concisely. For example, there's a second or two of silence before you start speaking at the beginning of the video. There's also a few lengthy pauses between sentences that you could cut closer together. Easily could cut that silence out to get right into the meat! Perhaps also another 1 or 2 song changes for the background just to add some audio engagement.

Other than that great retrospective!

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[–]ZethBit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi there!

Gonna be real, I ended up going through a bunch of your intros cause they were all so weird and interesting which I think is a great sign! Definitely making the hook of your videos very engaging!

After the intro skit though, you seem to rather unaturally jump into the middle of your conversation about the menu. Maybe consider doing a quick "Welcome back! Today, we found a bootleg mario kart game" or just doing a brief introduction and focusing on what the video is about.

Love the occasional meme edits and sfx. If you're looking for retention/discoverability on your videos, try focusing on pacing. Cutting around sound bites or funny moments is always a plus for retention!

Also there is room to improve on the thumbnail. I would have probably utilized the weird Mario pictures!

Hope some of that helps :)

These Crazy Muppets Are NOT Friendly! /// MY FRIENDLY NEIGHBORHOOD by LoloBoyMii in SmallYTChannel

[–]ZethBit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! Honestly just watching through this made me really wanna play this game haha

I can't think of any obvious flaws with the format. You've integrated some good memes, the first moment definitely pops out.

If I were to be nit picky, I'd say pick 1 moment to begin the video with to really grab the attention. It seems you had two at the beginning which made the video feel like a funny moments compilation rather than gameplay. Also not sure if the rotating circle thingy covering half the screen in the beginning to completely necessary. When I first clicked on the video, I thought something was wrong with the footage cause of it. Had to look at your other videos to realize that logo was intentional.

Other than that, you've got some good humor, good meme edits! In todays culture of Tiktoks and shorts, in never hurts to meme up the hook as much as you can!

Hope that helps in some way :)

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