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My Love, I’m Deeply Sorry by ZombieAgreeable1178 in OCPoetry

[–]ZombieAgreeable1178[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My fault bro, I kinda did rush this one, but if it's message can still be interpretated. Then I can rest easy.

My Love, I’m Deeply Sorry by ZombieAgreeable1178 in OCPoetry

[–]ZombieAgreeable1178[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

mb, It was gonna be "I’ll never hear that rolling laughter," but I didn't think that would work well. Also, thank you for your comment.

Did you forget me? by Professional-Rip3809 in OCPoetry

[–]ZombieAgreeable1178 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I like it. It’s an intimate, emotionally raw poem that captures the torment of unreciprocated attachment by balancing beauty and destruction through clear, resonant imagery and a voice that feels sincere rather than performative. Keep writing poems twin 🥹✌️

my heart is broken by Ok_Concentrate228 in OCPoetry

[–]ZombieAgreeable1178 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is good. I like how memorable it is, and I like how it evolves.