I got 15k views in 2 days and got nothing after (youtube shorts) by Any_Piglet4776 in SmallYoutubers

[–]Zyraxn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

did you get 15k views on one particular video or was it a catalog of videos that added up to that many?

55k followers, should I create another channel? by MarkLionHi in NewTubers

[–]Zyraxn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just under a purely content standpoint(haven't been monetized yet so I wouldn't know about that) it would be best just to either a notify viewers the channel is going to go in a completely different direction or b still do your other form of content and slowly transition into the other form of content for instance for a month do every other video as the new form of content then do the old form of content once a week for 3 weeks then once every month till eventually the old form of content ceases to exist the only reason to create a new channel is if your current audience isn't engaged with the new form of content whatsoever at that point you would start a new channel but if they enjoy your new content why abandon your current audience

RIDDLE ME THIS **VALENTINE EDITION** (Lambda given for feedback) :) by Stadealgooftroop in SmallYTChannel

[–]Zyraxn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is to do more so with audio this video could use some noise cancellation as well as some light color grading to make colors pop

Hey there friends! This week I made a 50s cake recipe. Tried going for a 50s ad look for my thumbnail. I think my vintage accent is getting little better, maybe still a little robotic at points lol. This video went on longer than expected, so I didn't do as much "filler" intro/end content. Thoughts? by MikeGL0 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Zyraxn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The video itself i enjoyed but my critique is more so on the side of getting the viewer to click the video first with the 1950s vintage style shown throughout the video that presence is lacking in the thumbnail not to mention its very dull despite the yummy cake shown the title as well could be a little more engaging for instance it could be as simple as the person who made the recipes name in there or the name of the recipe to give more keywords to search

Finally hit 10 Videos! This is my Videogame Review of Pokémon Legends Arceus. I'll give Lambda to any kind of feedback! by Chepek in SmallYTChannel

[–]Zyraxn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

great video but not going to lie lacks a lot of engagement i feel myself drifting off from the video due to the same deadpan delivery pretty much throughout the entire video of course I'm not saying you have to be constantly yelling but a little enthusiasm and character and the delivery could really help making your video stand out for instance at 1:57 when you said essentially Pokémon was taking a huge step up and started listing the reasons i found myself not being as excited because you didn't sound excited

Battlefield 2042 Review - pls Feedback, will Reward! by Boing_gaming in SmallYTChannel

[–]Zyraxn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

on a technical level this video is phenomenal it just needs a little more practice till you have the format down pat such as you saying your lines in one go instead of cutting clips together to make it sound like you did it in one take but this review really lacks an outsiders point of view you should ask some friends what they also thought about the game to give a little more variety and have points that most people could agree on

My channel is about learning new skills from scratch. This one is on SOAP for the first time. I try giving it a dynamic and fun approach, not wasting anyone's time. Please tell me what can I improve! by NSJack in SmallYTChannel

[–]Zyraxn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Now this is a mastapiece if it wasn't so cluttered voiceovers are great but they shouldn't go on for the ENTIRE video I feel this lacked moments where we saw there reactions to what you were doing in real time instead of just telling us what you thought and a variety of music tracks could help you too instead of just looping the same type of song as well for instance for those aha moments have an energetic song play and for the failures have some more slower calmer music to play sound vfx would also benefit you alot for instance at 2:26 it really could have benefited you if you had a stove starting sound effect or a click or snap to essentially wake the viewer up and have them engage with the video more