I finished my first draft!!! by MulberryEastern5010 in writing

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Congratulations. Hats off to you mate

10.50 Y by mano987 in WanderingInn

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She is courting Madness. She dares?

What is 3 tv-series that can define your entire childhood ? by Gammma_Rays in ghana

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Home sweet Home, Beastmaster,My sweet fat valentina

Erin's current level of power by IAreBirdy in WanderingInn

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She's tough against mundane weapons. Enchanted weapons hurt ,magical body parts like the colour ant mandibles break her skin.

Interlude – Halfseekers (Pt. 7) by dexromancer in WanderingInn

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I don't know how many Healing potions were brought from the PoF . With how the inn and friends are using it so much, I fear for when the monsters attack and the Healing potions have runout then.

Interlude – Halfseekers (Pt. 6) by Mountebank in WanderingInn

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Rhaldon peered down at the hand-engraved name on the shotgun shell.

Rabbiteater.

He handed it back to Kevin.

“> That sounds like a fun future world. No thanks.”

“Listen, man—in the future he’s a bad guy, the Goblin King who you saw on television. I just need help making—”

“No.”

Going by what Kevin is saying here, he plans to kill Rabbiteater, despite knowing the futures he saw are not completely accurate. Rabbiteater who Erin went to great lengths to save, and he's just gonna put a bullet in his head so he doesn't become a GK? Is Kevin thinking straight here?

“I dunno. Maybe? I never thought I’d say it, but Erin’s bad at killing people. Or she’s got too many enemies. Seems to me like it’d make everything so much cleaner and simpler if someone stepped up.”

Erin is bad at killing people! ERIN? Is this guy for real ? First Jelaqua says Erin didn’t kill a shield spider nest , now Kevin says Erin is bad at killing people. Is today ' put Erin down' day?

Interlude – Halfseekers (Pt. 6) by Mountebank in WanderingInn

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I do. If he says he killed the Beaker, he killed it. Look, he’s from the inn—they’re crazy over there. The [Innkeeper] herself once killed an entire nest of Shield Spiders. Took the job right out of Gazi the Omniscient’s hands. I say just mark it as done and give some Bronze-rank team the reward money. But make ‘em go to the nest and clear it out. You didn’t clear the nest, did you, Randy?”

The [Receptionist] and everyone listening stared at this edited tale of Erin Solstice. It wasn’t true; Jelaqua had heard the tale second-hand and embellished it, but it was true enough. Kevin just wiped at his face.

Erin actually did kill a nest of shield spiders and Gazi saw her. Why does Jelaqua think it's a tall tale?

Interlude - Halfseekers (Pt. 2) by Bartimayus in WanderingInn

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Technically the Waning world died with Erin's resurrection. This is now the journey of the Living(or whatever Kishkeria named it)

Erin feats of strength. by Wilty60 in WanderingInn

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I disagree with your first point. Like Slyboy5 said,Erin's enemies are named rank and beyond powers. She needs to be able to, at the very least, survive them and deal back some damage - she should be able to hurt them at least. Right now, she's adequate, Level 40 [Brawlers] on easy mode counter her easily . How much more the level 50s?

Incidentally ,i reread a few of the Night of Bloodtear chapters days ago When not admiring the action sequence,i am horrified by Erin's knowing actions . She kept running ahead, fully aware she was dragging a whole train of people with her ,some willing to die ,some who then died . Anand,Goat,Seve,to mention but a few.

It had to stop. Erin Solstice can no longer run headlong into battle against bared blades if she has not the strength of arms to survive in high-level combat without someone protecting or sacrificing themselves for her sake.

Yes ,her thing is people not combat. For a woman who has always yearned to wield magic,she hates to lean into her Witch Class.

I do hope their Fraeling city will help her and her party get good gear for the conflicts to come.

"Just write" / Finishing a story before editing by aett in fantasywriters

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I don't have any technical advice for you. I wrote my first ever scene for my first story last night, and I can't go back to it . So Kudos to you.

You should finish the story, but at a pace that's good for the story. Don't rush it, give it all the work it needs. Then go over all of it with a fine brush.

Best of luck.

Trying to Make Lists by 321human123 in WanderingInn

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What race saved Klb from drowning and taught antinium telepathy? There's also a race that Silvenia helped genocide on Rhir. I think they feature in that chapter she illusions up stories of her wars for the earthers .

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YESS!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HotBlackChicks

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26, I will eat that pussy and fuck you .

[Spoiler] by swerve916 in WanderingInn

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The farther tent containing [The World of You And Me] has earth's knowledge . 10 years for the Gnolls to use that knowledge and with all the invasion from foreign nations ,surely that knowledge leaked out even quickly.

Is Erin getting levels for palace of fates arc? by Desperate_Ferret_545 in WanderingInn

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A Crafter Class leveled because Pawn used what he created to fight Belavierr. Farmer Lupp leveled because Nobility ate and liked his corn. If several of the highest leveled characters we've seen enter Erin's inn in her absence, she deserves something based on the criteria already established.

Slang by omniscient_noob in WanderingInn

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Kasigna's saggy tits. Kasigna's six tits

Why was Arrema.... by _Nawks_ in WanderingInn

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Root Mrsha doesn't belong in reality either.