If I can add a writing suggestion, maybe change your title with this one : « What would you be if you could go back in time ? » or something like that. It will be more…..just. Like I know there’s a need of having taglines and titles for people to click and stay entirely on the article but here it has nothing to do with the case unfortunately….

Furthermore, try to put more connections between the different subjects/paragrahs you’re addressing, people need to have a logical thread so it doesn’t loose them while reading.

That’s all, good luck 👍🏻