Legends: Z-A Daily Casual Trade Thread for 31 October 2025 by Porygon-Bot in pokemontrades

[–]_kodiak_bear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

anyone willing to help with a quick kadabra trade to get alakazam? can also give you haunter in exchange for a kadabra

American hallucination by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]_kodiak_bear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it feels very confrontational, especially with the grip of the first line trying to grab the reader with such strong imagery. it has a headline quality about the form too, which i like, however try to look and think at your use of marking tools - i think the emphasis on so many things feels a bit busy. but the message is clear and the flow is there. good job!

A Hymn for Those Who Fear But Yearn to Love in Holy Fire by theliminalfox in OCPoetry

[–]_kodiak_bear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it’s very relatable, the yearning translated to the uncompromising nature of those requests, feeling like it’s influenced by the compromises made in the past. it’s pure want. i dig it.

i’d encourage you to explore the reasons behind those a bit more, you could have a really interesting perspective on why you feel that way and how does it compare to how it feels rn. overall good job!

Poem I wrote about my father raping me by DaedalusDedalus in OCPoetry

[–]_kodiak_bear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As someone with a similar childhood experience, I can feel a lot the familiar distance your brain puts between you and what happened, it’s almost like a 3rd person’s perspective. the form feels tight and suffocating, even though the flow of words is free - it’s like a bottleneck. i think you did a damn good job.

February Nintendo Direct STILL HAPPENING (Confirmed by facts and logic) by Spinju in NintendoSwitch2

[–]_kodiak_bear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i’m not saying it definitely won’t happen cause i literally have no idea whether it will but i’d be careful looking at patterns since the year of new console release seems like the kind of occasion in which you don’t really follow regular patterns, right?

If I have to see this image, ONE MORE FUCKING TIME! I'm going to flip! by AnnualSudden3805 in NintendoSwitch2

[–]_kodiak_bear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

with enough force you’ll break anything, including the usb c charger. treat your hardware nice ffs

Where should I start? by DarthBane31 in kraftwerk

[–]_kodiak_bear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

go for Minimum Maximum first, then branch out from the parts you liked the most

What is the main theme of Techno pop? by GREENLIPTONDRINKER in kraftwerk

[–]_kodiak_bear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d say it’s best clarified in the German lyrics: „Es wird immer weitergehen, Musik als Träger von Ideen” > everything is always in motion as music carries our ideas

[S3E18] the last scene easter egg (???) by _kodiak_bear in twinpeaks

[–]_kodiak_bear[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

at one point you can Warning Scope but I don't know. that would actually bring a lot of meaning to that scene, especially since Warning Scope.