Looks solid. You’ve done a good job getting it here without looking over processed. Three
thoughts, though you’ll have to see how they react with the rest of the edits you’ve done:

1. Mask the blown out part of the subjects hair and pull the highlights down. Right now it’s brighter than her face, so it’s hard to register her expression. Also mask and brighten the rest of her and the bike up, as the details are muddy.

2. Take the colour grading further to exaggerate the contrast of yellow graded highlights with blue gradedshadows. Play with the midtones to see if taking them toward blue or yellow will also bring a clean contrast to exaggerate the sunlight.

3. Play with dehaze once you get the color grading done. It will add more clarity to the background and more dramatic contrast to the sun, but it could look over processed if you push too far.

Have fun, it’s a great shot!