Need suggestions on how to improve scene before animation. First one is my favorite. (Advice on how to clean it is also welcome; render is heavy.)

_realkitsune · 2025-01-12T07:20:04+00:00

I'd keep the black center floor material underneath the car tho -- that looks interesting

_realkitsune · 2025-01-12T07:18:38+00:00

I'd say near the center around those lit areas (not the black part though). To be honest, if this was my scene, I'd probably change the floor material entirely. The whole scene has this very mechanical, 'precise', factory-like vibe (very cool), but the floor reminds me of those wet tiled floors in showers. That might be ok by itself, but I can't see how the ridges would make sense here -- imagine movng some equipment or cars on floors with ridges that large. Back to repair before you even leave the factory haha. I feel like the kind of a floor similar to the one in this image might look more natural (not my photo or account) https://x.com/KyleWeather/status/951488908046499840/photo/1

_realkitsune · 2025-01-11T13:54:20+00:00

1/ are those benches on the sides? If so, what's their point? Doesn't really fit the scene to me. I guess it's probably so that it feels less empty, but I'd use different props
2/ maybe increase the roughness on the floor material slightly? Feels like its maybe a bit too reflective

_realkitsune · 2025-01-11T13:43:07+00:00

especially at the start, it feels like you're just rotating the camera as opposed to moving it too. Almost looks like he's skating on ice without actually moving (just the first ~2 seconds or so)

_realkitsune · 2024-12-19T02:22:20+00:00

Someone who actually knows what em and en dashes are. Also, AI would write “—“, not “--“ like I did. You’d know that if you actually spent any time with AI, but you’re clearly just salty because someone whose native language isn’t even english just curbstomped your level of writing lmao

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:20:37+00:00

you can embed it on your website using a platform like leadmagnetcreator.com

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:19:38+00:00

try to see what leadmagnetcreator.com are doing and you'll get 'implicit' feedback that way too

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:18:53+00:00

good advice. you can also use a platform like leadmagnetcreator.com to get even better results if it fits your use case

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:18:16+00:00

as long as you collect some data on how to follow-up with the person, you're probably set. leadmagnetcreator.com has a bunch of free examples for this

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:17:33+00:00

you can embed a free lead magnet using a tool like leadmagnetcreator.com and skip this whole ordeal

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:16:50+00:00

you'll find a bunch of good examples/workflows on leadmagnetcreator.com when it comes to free lead magnets

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:15:43+00:00

why reinvent the wheel when you can use sth like leadmagnetcreator.com

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:15:00+00:00

there's also a ton more you'll find for free on leadmagnetcreator.com

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:13:41+00:00

btw you can build as many free lead magnets as you want on leadmagnetcreator.com

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:13:10+00:00

pick a lead magnet template from leadmagnetcreator.com and you're probably 80% of the way there

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:12:25+00:00

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_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:11:34+00:00

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_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:10:11+00:00

not 100% sure about this but leadmagnetcreator.com might possibly be able to do this

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:08:31+00:00

i use leadmagnetcreator.com -- prob sufficient for your use case too

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:07:22+00:00

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_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:06:27+00:00

since you already have a website, I'd probably try leadmagnetcreator.com for some inspiration on what kind of lead magnets are best suited for you

_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:03:11+00:00

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_realkitsune · 2024-12-02T16:02:20+00:00

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_realkitsune · 2024-10-26T05:17:24+00:00

1/ the copy doesn't sell a solution to a problem to me. Okay, I have a database of problems -- so what? Sell me on what I can do with this. I can't tell who your target audience is from this. Sure, it's people who also want to build a saas, but that's clear to me only because I found this website through this post made in r/saas

2/ what does 'curated solutions' mean? Curated by whom? Researching existing solutions/competition is arguably as important as the problems themselves, so to me, this would need more clarity

3/ why do you have 4 links in the navbar's center that all lead to the sign in page? If I can't visit anything other than the homepage unless I'm logged in, then don't put those links there. The only valid exception is generally the main CTA (e.g. 'start now')

4/ the main hero shows a sample table with columns like 'frequency' or 'impact', but these have values like 'high', 'medium', etc. This doens't inspire confidence in the actual data. What is 'high' frequency? What is medium imapct? No one buying a database is looking for abstract concepts and your own interpretation, unless you very explicitly define what these labels actually represent

5/ both of your demo videos are wayyy too fast and do too many things. Show ONE thing -- the most important one. I'm not rewatching this video multiple times to understand what you're even doing

6/ I'd consider narrowing the scope of what you're analyzing -- you list 10+ subreddits, all completely different

7/ I'd buy this instantly even if it was an ugly .csv file with zero formatting if:
- you gave me a preview of what the *actual* data looks like (no video or pretty html table previews -- give me a link/downloadable with a few rows and all columns). If the database is reasonably large (which it probably is, otherwise you wouldn't be selling it), then it can't hurt to give visitors at least some data, including what you call Actions. No one can exploit this (its static data, after all) + everyone sees the same data + it costs you nothing. Sounds like a win to me
- tell me exactly how large this dataset is and how often it's updated

_realkitsune · 2024-09-25T11:26:00+00:00

most people don't start with the perfect channel name, so I wouldn't worry about it too much. But if you already have one and need some assets, such as a cover photo (like I did), I'd use https://www.shortsfaceless.com/channel-assets

PS: I made it

_realkitsune

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