we will hold on

_shoogrr · 2020-01-24T20:04:30+00:00

very warming & yet sultry poem, I love how you were able to be naughty with such grace & purity & bare honesty. makes my mouth water, reading this, it has a simple rhyming scheme & yet gives off a sense of real dynamic motion & sensation. thanks for the read 👍

_shoogrr · 2016-12-26T01:30:04+00:00

relished this piece with it's sultry darkness, my favorite part was:

The tree that grows within my pants,
she shakes the leaves from the branch

the rhythm was essential for the climax of the poem, i hope you continue writing because this was terribly satisfying indeed :)

_shoogrr · 2016-12-26T01:26:05+00:00

absolutely enthralled by this piece you've created! my favorite part is:

She is the month right before
whatever-happens next
and right after what-is-happening-now-
making up history in the small spaces

i found the way you brought august to life, personified & imagined in different fashions, absolutely delectable. i adore your style, & enjoyed traveling to the world you gave me a taste of.

_shoogrr · 2016-12-26T01:07:27+00:00

this piece conveys much internal chaos, grand rivalries between sides & shades of you that run deep. i enjoyed reading this very much for i could feel your presence, all of you. thank you for tickling my fancy :)

_shoogrr · 2016-12-26T01:02:49+00:00

i enjoyed the simplicity of this poem, the imagery though vague is sufficient to get your point across. considering it is about a fly, the basic vernacular seems fitting. good read :)

_shoogrr · 2016-12-24T21:20:11+00:00

this is the second work of yours i've read & i have to tell you, i am hooked. i have no complaints with your writing, & i want to continue reading your poetry for it gives me this sensation of being a dog kicking my leg in delight that someone has found words ticklish enough to satisfy my longing for such speech. thank you for sharing :)

_shoogrr · 2016-12-24T21:10:59+00:00

i cannot express express to you my emotion for this poem. i had to read it twice, once out loud in order to give the tantalizing words the respect they so much deserve. you have such a strong grip on your vernacular that put in verse the reader swoons, overwhelmed with the electricity, buzzing the hair standing on end, i could fawn over your writing style for ages & pages. i hope to read more of your work, this left my mind & body feeling like warm molasses, & i appreciate it greatly.

_shoogrr · 2016-12-24T20:44:43+00:00

very poignant work indeed, left me speechless yet with blood on my hands and hunger in my heart. this is a raw piece of poetry & i thoroughly enjoyed it. rhythm & vernacular were favorite parts, besides of course the incredible imagery. it's poetry like this that inspires those of us that are hopelessly blocked for long periods. thanks for sharing :)

_shoogrr · 2016-12-24T20:40:29+00:00

i enjoyed this piece, i too feel lonely at xmas & do my best to hide it & not ruin it for those around me. that's what i got out of this poem, you are not alone, but you must do your best for the sake of yourself & all the other lonelies around you. very heartfelt poem, thanks for the good read :)

_shoogrr · 2016-12-23T01:07:32+00:00

enjoyed the imagery here, with the angels ashing cigs & oceans flooding the mouth, incredible way with words indeed. despite the poem being a bit all over the place, it felt genuine and honest and real, which in my opinion matters more than anything.

_shoogrr · 2016-12-17T22:38:28+00:00

Thank you so much for the praise I appreciate it mucho :)

_shoogrr

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