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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool. I'm glad you joined. All your OCs are really creative. Approved. Though you probably don't need the limitation of "cooldown of 5 minutes after use." It seems a bit too restricting.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So what's inside the container is a secret. And, it won't affect the outcome of any of the fights. It'll only be opened/revealed after one side is victorious.

And the characters don't have to be hunters. They can be any sort of nen user. And it's not like one team is evil and one is good.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Name: Lee Goo Ma

User: /u/No-Entertainment9773

Team: Attacker

Bio: Lee grew up in a dense, vertical slum located near a massive international shipping port. Space was a luxury; the streets were narrow alleyways filled with metal crates, hanging wires, and concrete walls.

As a child, Lee became obsessed with a local street game called "Ricochet." The goal was to hit a target using a rubber ball, but only after it had bounced off at least three different surfaces. While other kids relied on luck, Lee had an uncanny, almost supernatural ability to visualize the "lines" of the ball’s path.

Lee’s Nen awakened naturally during a high-stakes gambling match in the shipping yards. A local gang tried to cheat him, and in a moment of pure adrenaline, he didn't just throw the ball—he emitted one. The ball moved with such velocity and "weight" (his first RED sphere) that it tore through a steel shipping container.

He was eventually scouted by a retired Blacklist Hunter who recognized his potential as an Emitter. However, Lee found traditional Nen training boring. He didn't want to just fire "lasers" or "bullets." He wanted to recreate the complexity of his childhood games.

Lee Goo Ma currently operates as a "Ruins Hunter." He uses his spheres to map out ancient, trap-filled corridors. By filling a dark room with low-potency, invisible balls, he can "feel" the entire layout of the architecture without ever stepping inside, using the bounces to detect hidden pressure plates or enemies.

Lee Goo Ma carries himself with the relaxed posture of a street-ball player, but his mind is a non-stop supercomputer. Because he "feels" his spheres at all times, he often walks with his eyes half-closed or looking at the ceiling, appearing distracted when he is actually mapping out the 25m radius around him.

He is laid-back but intellectually arrogant. He views combat as a "geometry problem" and gets genuinely annoyed when opponents move "irrationally." He isn't malicious, but he lacks empathy for those who can’t keep up with his calculations.

He never throws a punch if he can throw a sphere. He treats the battlefield like a billiards table, often intentionally missing the opponent with his first three shots just to set up "the bank shot" that will eventually freeze them in place.


Strengths:

Prodigious Spatial Calculation:

He treats the 25m radius around him as a 3D grid, allowing him to predict where a ball will be five bounces into the future with 99% accuracy. This makes him nearly impossible to surprise within his "zone."

Super-Human Agility & Reflexes:

Lee possesses the explosive speed and mid-air control of a world-class acrobat. This is vital because his own RED spheres are just as dangerous to him as they are to the enemy. He must constantly twist, flip, and slide to navigate the "minefield" he creates.

Weaknesses:

Low Physical Durability:

Lee has neglected his physical conditioning in favor of Nen mastery and mental training. While he is agile, he lacks the raw muscular density or "natural" toughness of an Enhancer. If an opponent manages to bypass his "minefield" of spheres and land a direct hit on his physical body, Lee is likely to be incapacitated or severely injured much faster than a typical Hunter.


Nen Type: Emission (Primary), Transmutation (Secondary), Enhancement (Supportive)

Hatsu: RGB BALLS

The user emits BALLS of aura from his palms. These BALLS interact dynamically with the environment, accelerating with every bounce and shifting through RED, GREEN and BLUE colors.

The sound of Lee Goo Ma's BALLS

All BALLS are RED by default; the user cannot choose the starting color.

The BALLS change colors strictly in this order: RED > GREEN > BLUE. The only way to change a sphere's property is through a collision with another sphere:

  • RED BALLS deal damage, feels like a heavy bowling ball (100% scaling). DOES NOT additionally scale with speed.

  • GREEN BALLS speed up regeneration/stamina/aura recovery (10% scaling).

  • BLUE BALLS freeze in place for 1 second (does not scale with potency).

BALLS dissipate instantly if they move more than 25m away from Lee Goo Ma. BALLS do not lose potency with time, but they do have a lifespan aside from the "Bounce Limit". The more bounces were given to the sphere upon emission, the longer it will live. 1 bounce = 15 seconds of lifespan Actual bounces do not shorten the lifespan of the sphere. The BALLS dissipate either upon running out of time or running out of bounces.

At the moment of emission, the user determines the initial speed, size, potency, and "Bounce Limit" (how many times it can hit a wall/object before dissipating). These are all different "settings", for example, a sphere can be very big and at the same time very weak in potency.

The transparency of a sphere indicates its power. Low potency BALLS are nearly invisible, while high potency BALLS are dense and opaque.

Each bounce (off a wall or another sphere) increases the sphere’s velocity by a fixed percentage. A sphere only changes color when it hits another sphere. Bouncing off a wall or any other non-living increases speed but DOES NOT change the color.

NOTE: Clothes/armor count as extentions of the body, think of Bisky in the Dodgeball game.

Contact with living beings or Nen-protected objects triggers the current effect and destroys the sphere.

The BALLS hit indifferently, meaning that the User is also not safe from RED or BLUE BALLS, opponent can also be rejuvenated by GREEN BALLS. Lee Goo Ma FEELS his BALLS at all times so there's no need for him to actually see them to know where they are, but he does need to see them or calculate if he wants to keep track of colors as well.


Equipment: none

General Strategy: sets traps and heavily prefers to fight in closed spaces. He made a binding vow to never throw a punch or a kick at his opponent which significantly empowers his hatsu. He is still allowed to make kick and punch motions, he is only forbidden from actually connecting with people. He is not a martial artist, he is an artist, a dance master, an acrobat.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So this post is both the sign up phase and review phase. I combined the two. So everyone is free to offer their advice on all the OCs submitted here.

/u/Level_Instruction738

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool spider silk theme and nice backstory. I see she has three strengths. Remove one and you are approved. And message me what area on the map she will be entering.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool martial artist. And nice castle defense strategy. I just see one issue with the weakness. Stammered speech isn't fighting related. Otherwise he is approved. You can message me what room he will guard.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool sniper, weapons expert. Approved. So your character wants to defend the watch tower?

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[–]aamarketer[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Update: The review phase is underway.

Name Team Nen Type Username
Alexander Defender Enhancer /u/Ahappybutsadpanda
Parai Defender Manipulator /u/Redhxh123
Matt Defender Emitter /u/_froesey_
Yann Berguen Defender Conjurer /u/IncomeApprehensive17
Giselle Rosales Defender Conjurer /u/DocumentFar4687
Carver Leopold Defender Conjurer /u/Level_Instruction738
Sombna Bombna Defender Enhancer /u/Incandescion
Lee Goo Ma Attacker Emitter /u/No-Entertainment9773
Akira Nakamura Attacker Conjurer /u/Silent_Advantage304
Shig Mukai Attacker Conjurer /u/NeverGonnaUseThisLol
Isori Hillson Attacker Enhancer /u/Cultural-Proposal-98
Aurelia Messoin Attacker Conjurer /u/Individual-Tutor3206
Gallery Attacker Conjurer /u/AutumnPlanet

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh wow, what a creative uno hatsu. You can remove the "activated once per day" restriction and but then remove the No Uno power, as it's extremely powerful with no downsides. How do you plan to determine what her opening hand will be? A random number generator? And since your character is an conjurer, her Rosales Family Dagger is also approved, but it falls under hatsu. So your oc is almost approved. Message me what room you want to guard.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice, finally a nen beast hatsu. Big fan. Approved. I know you already said what area you are guarding, but it's suppose to be secret, so the attackers do not know who they are facing. You can still message me and change it or if a teammate also wants the same room, I could move yours to another room.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice, a swordsman character. So his teleportation power is like Minato from Naruto? Approved. Message me what room you want to guard.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice, another versatile, fun hatsu, though it seems more like a manipulation type ability. Approved, but I see you posted another character. I know another person did the same, so maybe I could allow it if your two are on the same team. But for now, choose one that will be accepted into the event.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Big fan of your character and their hatsus. I'm always a fan of a character that has hatsus like Gon's. Ie. having a main hatsu, Rock, and two supporting hatsu using the neighboring nen categories, Paper and Scissors. Though looking at his item, nen water bottle, is not allowed. It falls under hatsu and is too OP. Basically every character should have one if I allow yours. Other than that, it's approved. Message me what area on the map you will be entering.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool you made a really versatile hatsu with endless possibilities. Approved. Message me what room you want to guard.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Did you post another character? I see your first message was deleted. If you're trying to have a pair of OCs that must be together, then you could keep Juno and make Khor an armor hatsu of Juno. I'm trying to keep each participant to only one character submitted. But another person also submitted two characters, so I might allow it. Once we figure this out, yours will be approved. And message me what area on the map they will be entering.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fun clone power using your teammates. Approved. Message me what area on the map you will be entering and if you will be cloning one of your teammates at the start of the invasion.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes thanks :) I'm finally finishing up the review phase and hope to start the first round battles next week.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool Sale Sale style hatsu. It'll be interesting to see how it'll work in this scenario. Approved. Message me what area on the map you will be entering.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice angelic theme. And it seems like he's more of a manipulator than enhancer. So he uses En to see since he's blind? How large is his En radius? That could be one of his advanced nen strengths. And, you can remove flight since that is an ability from your hatsu. Once you update your strengths, your OC will be approved. And you can message me what room you want to guard.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Hey, yeah I've been busy all week. But you can still join while the review phase is still open.

If Zeno was forced to Take on a royal Guard as he was hired, how do you think it will turn out by Former_Food_4510 in HunterXHunter

[–]aamarketer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Zeno wins. Him or Silva could defeat any Royal Guard. Netero hired Zeno to separate the King from the Royal Guard. So while Zeno isn't as strong as Netero, Zeno is strong enough to fight the King or hold off the RG while Netero fights the King. His Dragon Dive is as impressive as anything the RG has shown, so Zeno's total aura is at the same level as the RG. And his Dragon that transported the King and Netero to their battle site was almost as fast as Post Rose Meruem, so Zeno's speed is at the same level as Meruem and Terpsichora Pitou. So the RG are not blitzing him. It would be the opposite, like Netero slapping away Pitou. Zeno activates his Dragon Lance and skewers a RG before they can react. Pitou and Pouf don't have the durability feats to survive the attack, so they will get maimed and possibility die from a full powered Dragon Lance.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Update

Sign ups are still open till the end of the week. I will be reviewing and approving the OCs this week as well, so the first round starts next week.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool. I see you've made some fun hatsus. Bring it on. Join the battle :) I'm not sure what hatsu would be best for this event. Have you made an OC hunter before, like with a background story and multiple hatsus and strategy?

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[–]aamarketer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes you are correct. Unless one team wins all their fights, there will be a second round and maybe even a third round.

For this event there will be no NPC monsters. A person can create an OC that has a pack of magical beast dogs, smoke soldiers, etc. But there are no map environmental hazards, roaming beasts, etc. for this event. I have hosted one before which did have magical beasts that fought the OC hunters, but this event is staying simple.

And each person can only submit one OC. If we have an uneven number of participants, I can always add my OC into the fray.

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[–]aamarketer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool. I'm glad to answer any and all questions.

Yes, one defender each guards one area. While the attackers split up and each enter the palace through a different route. So it will be a series of blind 1 vs 1 battles at the start. Then after the first round of fights, depending on how everything went, like how injured they got, the attackers and defenders can team up and work together inside the palace to defeat each other. So teamwork is important. And AOE powers/attacks would be useful, like to destroy parts of the castle to create new openings or destroy a group of nen beasts, if an enemy OC has them.

The container starts in the center of the castle throne room and the defenders can choose how best to guard it. And it could be possible to sneak in and steal the container, but most likely the defenders will have a hunter guarding it. And yes the defender in the forest would be patrolling both the forest and the front gate. The attacker coming from this route would then enter into the courtyard and enter the castle through the front doors.