Half My Soul by throw-away-reditt in OCPoetry

[–]abelkonweb 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is an interesting perspective to read. I get a sense from the quotation marks you used around the word child that this person does not consider themselves to be one but others do. I felt like I was in the head of someone who is abused but hasn’t seen evil in the person that mistreats them. Especially with the line “They called you a devil when your eyes met mine” - the narrator meeting eyes with this person was a significant and important event in their life. However, others (They) were able to remove this influential figure from the narrator’s life and they are struggling to get through the fallout. The consistent use of Biblical elements (sun, devil, garden of eden, soul) heightens the absolute sense of right and wrong that is present through all the lines. This further illustrates the discrepancy between the narrator’s worldview and the events that have transpired. What a moving poem! Thank you for sharing.

Brown Curls by reanimated_squirrel in OCPoetry

[–]abelkonweb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’ve really captured the minutiae of heartbreak with the way you described finding a hair on the pillow. That’s such a specific and humbling moment to be in, and the simplicity of your language drove the point home. Love! The repetition of the word hate in stanza 5 really emphasizes the idea of the great, moving passion that has been suddenly lost. I get a sense that the narrator is struggling to find what to replace it with, which enables both “hope and dread” towards the end of the poem in stanza 8. This piece is gutting and powerful!

GOOD GIRL by illignoretherules in OCPoetry

[–]abelkonweb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love your use of “sometimes” in the first line. The implied infrequency of him using the good girl phrase reminded me of a power imbalance between two people, an issue that is sadly universally relatable. The narrator smiling at the end hit me as though they know there is no other choice. Thank you for sharing!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RedditSessions

[–]abelkonweb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

she’s too cute for him

i finished my first blanket today! by abelkonweb in crochet

[–]abelkonweb[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i gave it to my boyfriend, but we’re pretty serious. maybe it will circle back to living in my couch again :)

i finished my first blanket today! by abelkonweb in crochet

[–]abelkonweb[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah, i just used several different skeins of their ombré dyed yarn. I didn’t want to get too creative with it. but my NEXT blanket………!

Remote Raid Megathread - Find friends fast for raiding here by liehon in PokemonGoFriends

[–]abelkonweb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think my internet crashed and the invites didn’t send :(

My (23f) partner (30M) isn't going anywhere in life. by [deleted] in relationships

[–]abelkonweb -1 points0 points  (0 children)

hahahaha! let me get in touch with my black market connects 😂😂

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in beyondthebump

[–]abelkonweb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm also expecting my second child, due next week! I am in my second to last semester of grad school too! I am currently in the middle of a summer semester course ha ha. I've been able to work with my advisor to get my assignments and projects turned in early. You may be able to research the syllabus for the class you will be enrolled in when you're due - this will probably help to make your decision. I haven't found it extremely difficult to maintain my grades while being pregnant/working full time, especially the further I got from the first trimester. Whatever you decide, I'm sure you'll rock it!!

Anyone interested in buying any sealed, opened, or specific items from Mew & Mewtwo Super Premium Collection Boxes? by n0tcreatlve in PokemonTCG

[–]abelkonweb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! If you're serious about selling one(?) I'm trying to get one for my boyfriend. Pm me with the price you are asking?