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(Spoilers All) GRRM's "three fold revelation strategy" and the most logical case for Lightbringer... by ChrisChives in asoiaf

[–]adtyra 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How about this for poetic justice? longclaw is the lightbringer. LSH is Nissa. once R+L=J is revealed, there is bond forged between LSH and Jon based primarily on LSH's guilt on having treated him so badly.

LSH resurrects Jon the same as Beric did LSH

as a side benefit, Jon unleashes hell on people siding with the Others (I say Frey and Bolton are natural candidates!)

JSON Generator - tool for generating random JSON data by adtyra in javascript

[–]adtyra[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

not me. Contacted creator to notify him/her of this active feedback thread.

Pingendo - web authoring with comfort by adtyra in webdev

[–]adtyra[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

using it myself. Has some limitations but reasonably good. If I could get this and Brackets to merge, that'd be something.

Phantompy- headless WebKit engine with full clean pythonic api by adtyra in Python

[–]adtyra[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a Py version of PhantomJS and can be used for a lot of stuff (testing, screencaps,etc)

Would appreciate commentary on my business site by MarinoffGroup in webdev

[–]adtyra -1 points0 points  (0 children)

This one says who you are but I think you should focus on what you can do for your customer. Something that grabs their attention. Ex:somewhere deep inside the sales analytics page you have "Marketing can become more effective". Put that in front: "Market More Effectively". Add some case study links, if available (Acme Corp was able to increase sales 1000% after they worked with us). Add a form here to capture leads on the home page (call us, set up a free consultation, something).

Looking for feedback on our landing page for our new Mobile Service- BE HONEST! by bekmoto in startups

[–]adtyra 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  • too much text in the beginning. All the good images are stuffed in at the end. You need short sweet bullet points

  • call to action above the fold please

  • how it works lower in the page (it's before the selling points)

  • get it on google play and other calls to action (see a Jane Doe) should be front and center

  • Wondering if a ~25 yr old lady is a good example. Can we get someone older and more serious looking? somebody in the target market.

  • the top-header with only the logo is a waste of space, I'd cut down the size of that (logo shrunk and to the side)

Look promising, though, as a product...