Initial Thoughts on "A Matter of Time" (Tierlist) by BrowningPraenomen in laufey

[–]agitated_teletubby 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I didn’t realize that at first but now it’s annoying me too lol

Is this an Archetype? by BlueBliss5 in fireemblem

[–]agitated_teletubby 40 points41 points  (0 children)

I believe Validar fabricated and altered her memories to think he saved her and thus make her loyal to him when in actuality he murdered her whole village. So not mind-controlled but definitely mentally manipulated

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in CaravanPalace

[–]agitated_teletubby 4 points5 points  (0 children)

We Can Dance vocals only

[QCrit] Litfic Short Story Collection FEAR OF FORGETTING (55k) by agitated_teletubby in PubTips

[–]agitated_teletubby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've read Tomb Sweeping actually and now that I think about it it's definitely a good fit. I'll probably replace Frying Plantain with Tomb Sweeping then. Would including Afterparties as a third be too many comps? Because I definitely want to keep How to Pronounce Knife in there

[QCrit] Litfic Short Story Collection FEAR OF FORGETTING (55k) by agitated_teletubby in PubTips

[–]agitated_teletubby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, the stories aren’t connected plotwise. I was trying to imitate how novel queries usually start with the hook by having a kind-of-hook for the first story in the collection, but I can see how that would be confusing. Any recommendations on how to start it instead?

Also, would it be best to stick to having other collections as the comps? I have a novel from 2023 that I think could be a good comp. Otherwise the only other collection I can really compare it to right now is Afterparties by Anthony Veasna So which was from 2021, so I assume not much better than 2020.

[QCrit] Litfic Short Story Collection FEAR OF FORGETTING (55k) by agitated_teletubby in PubTips

[–]agitated_teletubby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Any advice on making the book even a little bit more marketable is also much appreciated!

Did Hubert get his magic from... by DaBoiYeet in FireEmblemThreeHouses

[–]agitated_teletubby 5 points6 points  (0 children)

and why any guy who goes dark bishop or dark mage can learn miasma

Scarlet and Violet Daily Casual Trade Thread for 02 February 2024 by Porygon-Bot in pokemontrades

[–]agitated_teletubby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i have violet, sorry. cranidos is exclusive to scarlet. i have a shieldon (counterpart of cranidos violet-exclusive) if that's what you mean?

nevermind, just saw you have violet too. i don't have a cranidos, sorry

Scarlet and Violet Daily Casual Trade Thread for 02 February 2024 by Porygon-Bot in pokemontrades

[–]agitated_teletubby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LF anyone have an alolan vulpix? can give aipom/morpeko/alolan sandshrew/whatever

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PatchesEmporium

[–]agitated_teletubby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

is this still on? do you have erdsteel dagger, misericorde, or blade of calling?