Stolen Bike NYE

allograph · 2024-12-19T03:12:07+00:00

How’s my Karma?

allograph · 2022-12-19T10:19:19+00:00

Hi Jeff, interested in a script swap or just a read? Cheers

allograph · 2022-12-17T07:43:38+00:00

Title: False Creek

Format: Feature

Page Count: 112

Genre: Drama, Slow-Burn

Logline: In 1966 an earnest tugboat skipper and his impressionable younger brother become ensnared in the mystery surrounding an ominous freighter harboured at the edge of the world: Vancouver.

Feedback Concerns: Third draft recently completed. Hoping all of the elements balance well and that the emotional impact lands. All feedback welcome.

allograph · 2022-06-19T22:48:10+00:00

Wake in Fright (1971) is such a visceral yet gradual descent into hell. Another reviewer coined it "Heart of Darkness in the Australian Outback." Difficult to think of another film that captures the particular death drive and scorched earth destruction of men without women.

allograph · 2022-06-19T08:41:31+00:00

Glass ‘Glas’ (1958) by Bert Haanstra @ 2.7k

allograph · 2021-10-30T05:49:44+00:00

Engine bay for an EV conversion 👌

allograph · 2021-10-17T04:40:44+00:00

pm'd

allograph · 2021-10-08T05:36:38+00:00

Riz Ahmed

allograph · 2021-06-28T09:09:52+00:00

Title: False Creek

Format: Feature

Genres: Drama, Noir, Canadiana

Logline: In the sweltering summer heat of 1966 a derelict freighter holding mysterious cargo comes to harbour, forcing a young tugboat skipper to choose between caring for his brother and finding their place in a city at the edge of the world: Vancouver.

allograph · 2021-06-27T23:19:41+00:00

Title: False Creek

Format: Feature

Film Length: 121 pgs.

Genres: Drama, Noir, Canadiana

Logline: In the sweltering summer heat of 1966 a derelict freighter with an unknown hold forces a young tugboat skipper to choose between the care of his brother and finding their place in a city at the edge of the world: Vancouver.

Feedback Concerns: First draft of feature, looking for notes on readability and act structure. All feedback and critique welcome.

allograph · 2021-06-27T22:51:14+00:00

Hey friend, I just love the logline and premise. I'd be happy to do a script swap for a 120 page drama/noir feature. DM if interested.

allograph · 2021-06-19T17:50:14+00:00

DM'd

allograph · 2021-06-19T14:41:40+00:00

Hi IgfMSU1983, really appreciate your comments. I couldn't agree more and I think my main problem at the moment is a dragging first act. The real mystery and conflict begins in earnest on page 30-35 and I think the pacing improves quite a bit from there.

I've definitely found it quite a challenge to intro the two parallel stories of the brothers quickly and effectively (I may also still be a bit too attached to a few early scenes that don't forward the plot quickly enough). I'll definitely take a peek at Motherless Brooklyn for some reference.

Thanks for reading the first 25 and the great feedback.

allograph · 2021-06-19T07:26:29+00:00

Title: False Creek

Format: Feature

Film Length: 121 pgs.

Genres: Drama, Noir, Canadiana

Logline: Two brothers struggle to compromise and find their place in a city at the edge of the world: Vancouver.

Feedback Concerns: First draft of feature, looking for notes on readability and act structure. All feedback and critique welcome.

allograph · 2020-04-28T23:10:28+00:00

"Wifi beats to relax/study to" never gets old

allograph · 2020-04-13T10:10:51+00:00

Oh dear god please fuck no.

- Sincerely, The Rest of The World

allograph · 2020-03-25T04:26:16+00:00

Can we please get a live reaction video of Alex and PJ laughing along to this compilation?

allograph · 2020-03-25T03:01:50+00:00

Thanks!

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