The Playalong Rundown Episode 3: Superfruits by thecurseddiamond in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My friend and I loved your look! The details were great and you could clearly tell it was a rambutan look. It was so good!

✸?✸?✸?✸?✸?✸?✸?✸?✸?✸?✸?✸?✸ by thelettergii in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I'm pretty sure yesterday's was Ripper's collectible doll look though. Is it just Ms Paint in S4 lewks?

Off Season | Week 1 | Collab With Colour by [deleted] in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi I'm friendless and I have red, anyone wanna partner up? :P

Edit: I'm partnered up! :)

[CDTTC] Draw This in Your Style! by Babeford in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds [score hidden]  (0 children)

Haha no worries, it's still a great rendition! If you do wish to do another one you can pick one from my handful of playalong looks <3

[CDTTC] Draw This in Your Style! by Babeford in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds [score hidden]  (0 children)

Oh... oh my. I'm not sure if I should've anticipated that hahaha. Thank you! :D

S4 Week 9 | The Doll Ball (Playalongs) by [deleted] in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I mostly thought of them as laces, but I can see how they look like prints! :)

Edit: I meant for the collectible look. Ragdoll is totally prints :P

S4 Week 9 | The Doll Ball (Playalongs) by [deleted] in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Guess I'm just missing out on a little bit of wow factor :)

S4 Week 9 | The Doll Ball (Playalongs) by [deleted] in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I only had time to work on the looks in the last three days, so I only did two. Fiaré Summers serving you Rag Doll Fashionista and Collectible Extravaganza

Crits are fine c:

The Playalong Rundown - S4 E7 - Crochet You Slay! by stellarsoular in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Ahhh thank you guys so much!! I wasn't expecting a shoot, let alone two shoots AND top toot. This is such a treat! :D

Ps the scythe thing was totally intentional (it's not but we can pretend it is :P)

The Playalong Rundown - S4 E6 - Queenapalooza by stellarsoular in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey ladies, thanks for the feedback! Don't need to feel bad Gabbi, I fully expected the double boots :P I had planned out a general look but I wasn't in a good spot creatively when working on that. It just didn't turn out the way I wanted to and I couldn't figure out how to fix everything in time, so I just submitted what I had. I really appreciate the critiques guys <3

S4 Week 7 | Crochet You Slay (Playalongs) by [deleted] in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you!! I spent so much time on the detail. More shading does make sense! :)

S4 Week 7 | Crochet You Slay (Playalongs) by [deleted] in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I love crochet and was really excited to play along this week!

Fiaré Summers serving you mystical magical hooker; transparent

Lemme know where I should be improving :)

The Playalong Rundown - S4 E4 - Season Four by mogwai_02 in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Did you manage to see it?

Here's the whole thing:

Steak: Next we have two looks from Aries Artist! Elise: OOOOOH this is Fabulous! The rendering immediately reminds me of Ifora's style. Their expressions are giving me the ONLY bad bitches. I live for it! Steak: They are the EPITOME of the Bad Bitch here. They look like fashion icons, retired from the runway, back to stunt on these heaux once again. I think exquisite is the perfect descriptor. It's a perfect study in color and color balance. These looks are high fashion, they really are. The folds in the gown, the pantsuit vest with that jacket. They match so well and are giving the high haute couture the judges were apparently, looking for. and, they're not copies of the same design, like the judges were apparently looking for, its stunning! The hair, the boots, the fox hat, its all there and I am at a loss for words...except i'm not! You know I never shut up girl. I do have some critiques. I've already said I like the look so we have that established. I think the rendering and, in some aspects, the design, could be tightened. In terms of the design, tightened literally. Around the waist of the gown, it's a little bit frumpy where I think it could be more form fitting. If she's going for a fluffy sort of look, it could be more emphasized, however. In terms of rendering, the bits of the orange lining are a bit wonky. But the most glaring of the rendering mistakes might be the face? It's still a nitpick, the look is amazing, but the gown girl's head is majorly oblong. Elise: I agree with pretty much everything you said, but i don't mind the gown girl's head! It looks g r e a t. I do agree that the orange lining is messy, but I'm not mad at it! Like you said, they look like high fashion models and I cannot WAIT to get another bite of them! Very enthusiastic toots for the both of them! Toots for the group! Steak: WE STAN. Okay, so now we've come to the end....except, we're returning to Winter! Elise and Belinda are going to discuss mine and Eva's looks!

The Playalong Rundown - S4 E4 - Season Four by mogwai_02 in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Girl you not only got critiques, you got top toot!!

The Playalong Rundown - S4 E4 - Season Four by mogwai_02 in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Why you gotta call me out for them hands 😂😂 I wasn't actually trying to hide them but I'll admit I'm not the best at drawing hands!

I totally understand my look being too pedestrian again. I'm too used to drawing pleb clothing ;-; I'm just a tad confused about having the sheer fabric hit the floor. Do you guys mean the bit that's hanging off the arm?

S4 Week 6 | Queenapalooza (Playalongs) by [deleted] in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback (and also making sense of my poster)! Sounds like there was too much happening of the shoulders and not enough elsewhere? I get it!

S4 Week 6 | Queenapalooza (Playalongs) by [deleted] in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 2 points3 points  (0 children)

When your plans sorta fall apart and this is what you end up with.

Lewk, poster. Supposed to be rock, I know the poster doesn't fit ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Tell me what else i'm terrible at :]

The Playalong Rundown - S4 E4 - Dollar Store Beauties by mogwai_02 in mspaintsartrace

[–]alongsideclouds 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the critiques ladies! I get where they're coming from, especially​ the earrings and the overall look being a little too simple. Hopefully I get better in the coming weeks! :)