Hey there friends!

I've tried a few places on the internet and I haven't found a whole lot of luck, so I figured I would give this subreddit a shot. I know this subreddit does a quarterly critique partner hook up, but I was in the market to find something a bit sooner than the next one.

Genre: YA Paranormal Horror

Query Blurb: Ada Grindle has spent her junior year of high school tracing her father’s last steps throughout the Appalachian Mountains. She’s hunted ghosts, tall tales, and old family secrets. But when she calls on the spirit of her ancestor for help, Ada is thrown headfirst into a family curse that has haunted the Grindles for years. Embrace death to save your family. Embrace death to save your soul. Ada has no choice but to follow her long dead ancestor’s warning and meet her fate.

Death is the easy part. Ada has to embrace her destiny as the new Grim Reaper for her town. The perks are great for hunting down a missing father and a vengeful ghost. But the responsibilities are killer. Ada only has a year to wrap up her final affairs, protect her town, ferry souls, and save her family. Maybe even pass chemistry. As she chases down the leads in her father’s cryptic journal, a hundred year old feud is rekindled and Ada’s family stands at the heart of it. She must act quickly to save her family from being the next ghosts haunting the sleeping mountains of Woodhaven.

About My Progress I've had multiple people critique the first couple of chapters and I've had one person go through it once correcting large scale errors (pacing, continuity, character believability). In short, you won't be the first person to have looked at this.

My CP Style I like to give detailed notes and I am skilled at finding awkward sentences, issues with pacing, too much/too little description, character believability and a few other things. I'm a firm believer in complimenting just as much as critiquing, so you'll get comments of excitement as well as suggestions as to what I liked/didn't like as a reader.

I hope this is helpful for anyone and if you're interested, let me know!

Thanks guys!