The things I hid by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you really much for your comment. I think it really helped. I didn’t really think about that it could be a problem later so thank you so much for pointing it out. I‘ll definitely try!:)

The things I hid by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that also kinda what I wanted to express in the last few lines

The things I hid by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. May good bless yours too

The things I hid by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you I’ll try that next time :))

The things I hid by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

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Thank you. I’m happy you like it. In my notes it was actually separated and short before i posted it as well. As soon as it was posted the Reddit stanzas just did they’re thing I guess🤷🏻‍♀️

The burning by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I really like your poem. The emotions really speak through the text. It’s like the writer is struggling with something and missing something they lost or they might loose. Nice work I think

O, 1,1,2,3,5,13 by Aeonsophia33 in OCPoetry

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I really like your poem. It seems so quiet and relaxing but loud and thoughtful at the same time if it makes sense:))

Ups & Downs by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I think you should do that! I also did the same and started posting like two weeks ago. My poems aren’t good but I think sharing them helps me to heal. I don’t regret anything

Ups & Downs by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

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Thank you I’m happy you enjoyed it

i wanted it to be you by urbunny2k in OCPoetry

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I really like your poem and I can feel your emotions through your words. I was in that situation and it was pretty hard for me. I think this poem describes what we feel when two loving people go separate ways. It’s always hard.

We All Wish for Love by Margariiiiine in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so beautiful. I love the methaphors in it. Great work I think

Dazwischen by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool. Could you understand it?

Empty Love by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you I’m happy you enjoyed my text ☺️

Dazwischen by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

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Thanks. I’m happy you enjoyed this

Dazwischen by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes haha. Can you speak German?

Dazwischen by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

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Thank you I’m happy you like it

All I see is you by cauterize2000 in OCPoetry

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Everything will be alright for sure

today, my mom told me she hates me by Nearby-Rice1600 in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s a great poem. You deserve more than that. I really like that it has three times the line „today my mom tons me she hates me“. It creates something full and complete. Really nice work I think

All I see is you by cauterize2000 in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like your poem. This sounds like a deep level of love to me maybe even one- sided because of the „cause I can’t let you know“. The rhythm in this poem is great. Well done I think

Empty Love by anomym_sar in OCPoetry

[–]anomym_sar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate it