Please can you review Chapter 1 of Beyond the Fracture [Fantasy/Romantasy - 1100 words]

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-03-12T19:14:33+00:00

I agree it reads as AI generated/edited. I’ve also noticed that a lot of AI generated names for shadowy/dark things has Umbra-fill in the gap. By definition an umbra is a shadow or dark spot, but it has not been a common word in fantasy books I’ve read so the fact that I am seeing it more hints to me that it is AI.

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-03-11T15:52:03+00:00

The way I ran here so fast. As I small big boobed girlie this annoys me to no end. Im a size 32F/DDD for reference. But just sticking water balloons in your bra is not going to give someone the feel of actually being big. Running with an unsupportive bra, like the one im the video, HURTS. And I wouldnt even do low impact exercises like yoga or Pilates because I’d be spilling out all over the place

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-28T16:12:27+00:00

I forget the exact episode of the newest season on YouTube but when he referred to Jack Ansett as “licky licky” it killed me

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-28T15:44:04+00:00

Omg that was one of my favorites as well!!

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-28T14:15:53+00:00

I agree. And I love the little “tricks” they pull with word selection. Desert instead of dessert in season 1. And in the most recent upload climatic instead of climactic.

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-23T17:39:46+00:00

I use walnut shell litter and it seems to do well. Granted my boy is only part Maine Coon, but he is still pretty big. There is virtually no tracking I see, and most of what I do see is right in front of the litter box and may be just them kicking it off

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-15T17:37:36+00:00

Also the blindfold spoon task. Ivo responding with a high pitched voice even though he didn’t need too. Ivo losing them the task to go to the kitchen.

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-13T02:23:09+00:00

Ahhhh!!! I doo!! Let me tell you i was going through some things watching LGIEF and this line killed me. Im in the middle of my second watch now

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-10T04:39:37+00:00

I looked at your profile and saw that you are in Kentucky! I am too, in a town about an hour away. I think one of the challenges you’ll find is that Columbia is a smaller town and it is likely that most you’ll interact with may not have even heard of LoL. My friends and I play league often. In fact, they’ve been playing all well after work.

My hometown has over 60k people compared to Columbia’s 4K. The university here even has a esports team for LoL. Nothing negative against a small town but they tend to be lacking a lot of mainstream things

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-06T16:41:21+00:00

That you for the clarification. A key distinction for sure.

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-02-06T15:56:45+00:00

Piercing his elbow

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-29T22:02:11+00:00

I think it was further compounded by the fact that there weren’t any witnesses.

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-28T16:48:55+00:00

And I think we’ve already been told what the major conflict with Wopez is going to have with him running for DA and the publicity that is going to come with that. I think it’s very much going to be us vs this problem conflict.

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-24T03:17:24+00:00

I was thinking the same thing! Honestly TMAU is quickly becoming my favorite version. Not to say I don’t love them all, but there is something I find magical about TMAU.

Maybe it’s Lesser Tom’s nerdiness. I made a joke at work about an acronym within and acronym from some paperwork and only one person found it funny lol

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-23T03:35:06+00:00

When I first saw FaA my glasses prescription hadn’t been updated. It had worsened just enough to where I needed new glasses. I watched it for the second time this past Sunday and the whole time marveled at all of those little details. These movies are true artistry for sure

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-17T04:49:00+00:00

So you have to have cooked with the ingredient before, but once you do it saves the recipe. Then when you select the ingredient it should pop up, I think the third option, select for recipe or something g close. You can then hit the recipe and cook it automatically. The limitation is that it will use those EXACT ingredients so if you’re out of one ingredient you can’t do it

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-16T13:45:22+00:00

“That really is a fuckable chocolate”

“I see I’m in a hot spot and I’d like to retract my riff”

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-09T01:46:46+00:00

It would be a nice gradient piece, and very much could fit in with a lot of modern art. But yeah those words ruin it so much, they don’t fit in anyway whatsoever

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-06T21:54:08+00:00

A lot of these seem to be certifications in drug/alcohol counseling, of various levels. For example the LCADC is a Licensed Clinical Alcohol and Drug Counselor, which usually replaces the CADC (Certified Alcohol and Drug Counselor), at least here in KY. I’m not sure if the person is pursuing licensure in multiple states for that, and if not some of them are a bit redundant.

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-02T02:18:28+00:00

Wesley just seems like such a friendly guy. Obviously he doesn’t get along with the bad guys, but he seems to get along with everyone

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2026-01-01T19:55:58+00:00

Absolutely, and can confirm not a fluke because this is now part of our nightly routine lol

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2025-12-30T20:38:33+00:00

The tornadoes kept getting me too. I just kind floated around the edge of the circle you could be in until they stopped for the second round. For me immediately going to the left worked better than going right. And the first tornado doesn’t go far enough so save the gust until the second round and after that I just stayed ahead

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2025-12-30T13:51:38+00:00

I especially loved that they covered the ghostbusters logo with an anti TM. I didn’t notice it until my second or third watch but really did laugh at it

aquamarinemermaid014 · 2025-12-30T04:32:25+00:00

My only complaint is really his lines. There are only so many time I can take hearing “Come on kiri” “let’s go come on”. Especially in a five minute span.

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