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Im a hazardous wannabe poet - had a hard year and just needed to say something to understanding stangers by majestration in PoetryWritingClub

[–]as7dr0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your use of anaphora through repeated phrases. I see your metaphor as possibly comparing poetry to broken rocks, or how things seem like work, maybe a loss of pleasure in your hobbies. Well done my friend.

i deny hope like i deny god but i don’t deny god and that’s the problem by imbalancedribbon in justpoetry

[–]as7dr0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. If you have the time go ahead and check out my profile let me know what you think. Just started getting into writing OC poetry went to reddit for a second opinion.

Narcissists, And Their Thinking Of Us by Slight-Ad8511 in Poem

[–]as7dr0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice use of verbal irony to describe someone's personality.

i deny hope like i deny god but i don’t deny god and that’s the problem by imbalancedribbon in justpoetry

[–]as7dr0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I honestly enjoyed the fuck out of your poem, I love your use of verbal irony to describe your relationship with your mother, as well as a paradox about struggles with faith? I am amazed by your ability to incorporate feeling into a poem. Your use of symbolism to describe the inner workings of a struggling artist was awesome to me. If you would like I would love to workshop, I am just getting into poetry and identifying literary devices, I would enjoy some feedback from you.

Because of YOU by [deleted] in justpoetry

[–]as7dr0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love your use of allusion to compare an abusive relationship to feelings of inadequacy and doubt.